Reviews for Rome Wasn't Built in a Day
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
great story!
BlueDiamondStar chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Emotional. Almost made me cry.
I assumed it was because of Kate, all Neal's terrible pain
JackiLeigh chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Really liked the story, I would have like to have known the context of the story to know what Neal was in so much pain and anguish about. But that is just me. It's not, at all, essential to enjoying the story. Great Job!
mam711 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Very nice story. I liked that Neal didn't break down until Peter held him.

A couple of comments: this should contain a spoiler warning for Point Blank in the summary; and "taught" should be "taut".
Ultracape chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
This was excellent. I don't see how you could improve it in any way.
Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Very nice job on this - I love the way that Peter is there for Neal. I hope you decide to continue this but if not great job.
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
I enjoyed your insight into Neal's anguish and suffering. This fic is well-written and I particularly like your use of detailed, emotive sentences. I think the ending was a good cut-off point, but if you'd like to continue this fic, I think that could be done, too. :)