|Reviews for Cassandra Caffrey Chronicles: The Coldest Heart|
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/21/2013
Please please please do A sequel
| morgo7kc chapter 21 . 10/12/2010
haha, excellent chapter! you had me laughing at the end, sure sign of a good fic :) I'm sad its over, but this ending fit. sequel? maybe?
| CassidyCaffrey chapter 21 . 10/12/2010
Sooooo sweet )
| Joey's girl forever chapter 21 . 10/12/2010
This was an excellent story! I loved it! You should do a story where cassie gets a boy friend and Neal turns into the over protective brother. I think that would be fun!
| Ronni chapter 21 . 10/12/2010
OMG! I LUVED! this story and i luved how u used the title as the last chapter's name! SO CREATIVE! OMG this was the GREATEST white collar fanfic i have EVER read! LUV IT! U r an AMAZING writing! Keep it UP!
| peppe1951 chapter 21 . 10/11/2010
A great ending to a wonderful story...you do know that now you have to write an sequel...Cassie life with Neal. June will be a great mother figure to the young girl as she is to Neal..what about school, etc..
| peppe1951 chapter 20 . 10/11/2010
This was a really good chapter. I wished there was some way Cassie could get out on a work release program like her brother...is there nothing Peter can pull to get the young girl released like he did Neal?
| Ultracape chapter 12 . 10/9/2010
I should make it clear that it was at the begginning of this story that I didn't understand the emotional turmoil Peter and Neal had over this.
| Ultracape chapter 11 . 10/9/2010
Given these chapters, I really don't understand the melodrama of the beginning of this.
Neal's sister broke out of prison. Why would that have been something that could have killed him. I can understand upset but certainly not to the extent you were describing.
Also, if she was a juvinile, why would she have been in a regular prison?
There are a lot of unconcious assumptions here. Please, treat us like idiots and tell us what you think we should already know. I'm totally lost at the emotional turmoil.
| Ronni chapter 19 . 10/8/2010
I LUV THIS CHAPTER AND THE SONG WAS PERFECT! i luv ur writing u have become my fav author (i luv the video too! AMAZING) PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS IS AMAZING! POOR NEAL and CONSTANCE!
| Luna Wolfe chapter 18 . 10/6/2010
And you again leave us at a cliff hanger. Wow, you sure are good at those, aren't yah? As always, UPDATE SOON! We're all dying to hear what happens next!
| morgo7kc chapter 18 . 10/6/2010
hey hey hey, I thought you said in chapter 7, parents deceased? How is Johnathan still alive then? Good chapter, Peter and Jones's conversation (and Peter's thoughts afterwards) made me laugh. update soon, plz?
| Joey's girl forever chapter 18 . 10/6/2010
This is a great story! I love the idea of Neal having a little sister! I think that you should deff put Constance in your next story :)
| Duffy1 chapter 18 . 10/6/2010
I always like your writing. I don't care for stories including Neal's family. We know nothing about that at all so it seems not possible to me in any way yet. Good, I don't like slash. I'm sick of reading about Neal getting beaten up. I don't want him hurt physically at all. Something was mentioned on one of the forums about we should keep Neal being Neal. That means he does things he shouldn't but for a good reason, like in the Pilot concerning Hagen. That was great! Sara was one of my favorite characters because she was immune to him like Diana. I thought when he wound up going to kill her was one of the funniest scenes in the episode. It's hard to write a good love scene with Neal, he's still recovering from Kate. Sorry I can't be more help, but just keep giving us stories.
| Linoria chapter 17 . 10/4/2010
Great story so far! I'm really looking forward to more!
oh, don't let them die.. please:D