Reviews for Crossfire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bella as a blonde. That would be something to see. What color will Edward dye his? He has an unusual hair color that people will be on the lookout for too. It'd be a shame to cover that pretty hair though. |
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![]() ![]() Loved it. My thoughts? simple: UPDATE! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it and I want bella and edward together but first I want to know why edward did all those things. cant wait for next chapter please update soon! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a brill story cant wait to see where you go with this. I hope they fall in love and stay being on the run how romantic lol:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Still loving it. I love how you are not just jumping into the whole hot and heavy but actually letting them build a foundation. Can not wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor bella being chained to a bed watching that cant believe she had to dye her hair wow he notices alot about her whats thw tatoo what he writting update soon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! I love the dynamic between E and B, even though it's tense and sometimes, as you mentioned, awkward. It is clear that Edward has a soft side and I am really intrigued by his character. This is quickly becoming one of my all time favs. Keep up the excellent storytelling, I adore this fic :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i totally love this story! can't wait to see what you come up wth next... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the chapter. UpdAte soon please can't get enough of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon please pretty good chapter what the hell is he writing and why didn't he dye his hair too? Wouldn't his hair color be easier to spot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just read your story and am really liking it. It's different. I can't wait to see what happens with Bella and Edward. How long does Edward really plan to keep Bella? Poor Charlie must be scared out of his mind. Why was Edward in mental hospitals? Why did he try to kill himself? Is he off his meds? Does he even really need the meds to begin with? |