Reviews for Crossfire
Nissa-Cullen chapter 4 . 10/2/2010
Bella as a blonde. That would be something to see. What color will Edward dye his? He has an unusual hair color that people will be on the lookout for too. It'd be a shame to cover that pretty hair though.
jaantjj chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
update soon
critic chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
Loved it. My thoughts? simple: UPDATE! :)
TimeTraveler15 chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
I really like it and I want bella and edward together but first I want to know why edward did all those things. cant wait for next chapter please update soon!
natalie louise xo chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
awsomee xx
Lorna jones chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
What a brill story cant wait to see where you go with this.

I hope they fall in love and stay being on the run how romantic lol:)
nightdreamz-n-panicattacks chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
YAY! Still loving it. I love how you are not just jumping into the whole hot and heavy but actually letting them build a foundation. Can not wait for the next chapter!
lozzy035 chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
poor bella being chained to a bed watching that

cant believe she had to dye her hair

wow he notices alot about her

whats thw tatoo

what he writting

update soon
MissTeenageDream chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
Loved it!
suziefknQ chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
Fantastic chapter! I love the dynamic between E and B, even though it's tense and sometimes, as you mentioned, awkward. It is clear that Edward has a soft side and I am really intrigued by his character.

This is quickly becoming one of my all time favs. Keep up the excellent storytelling, I adore this fic :D
boylover19 chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
wow! i totally love this story! can't wait to see what you come up wth next...
ADADancer chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
I like the story so far.
Jaz1990 chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
I love the chapter. UpdAte soon please can't get enough of it
thenextMrs.Lutz chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
update soon please pretty good chapter what the hell is he writing and why didn't he dye his hair too? Wouldn't his hair color be easier to spot?
Nissa-Cullen chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
I've just read your story and am really liking it. It's different. I can't wait to see what happens with Bella and Edward. How long does Edward really plan to keep Bella? Poor Charlie must be scared out of his mind. Why was Edward in mental hospitals? Why did he try to kill himself? Is he off his meds? Does he even really need the meds to begin with?
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