|Reviews for ReWrite: Battle Of The Brothers|
| SeverusPotterSnape chapter 8 . 2/9
That's it?! I feel sorry for mycroft... Its true that there's a lot of stories of Johnlock, but what about Johncroft?
| hippysheep chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
sooo feeling for Mycraft!arrrgggg now I have that in my head!grrr sniff
| hippysheep chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
jaw hanging open..owww Mycroft's got a *crush*..hehehe
| Insane Liam chapter 8 . 10/24/2011
sadly no mycroft/john story I've read so far had a happy ending, well at least not for Mycroft. Don't get me wrong, because I love the paring of John/Sherlock but dear Myroft always has to stand back. well at least he can take confort in knowing John is safly back home at 221b Baker street.
well done (re-done)
| gginsc chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
I just love it! A jealous Sherlock is soooo sexy!
| Blackcurrant Bonbons chapter 8 . 12/5/2010
Gah I loved this story! I always love any John/Sherlock pairings and Mycroft thrown in was amazing! I thought it was very sweet how Mycroft doesn't get revenge and helps them even though he knows he can never have John!
I'm writing something like this at the moment, so if you want to check it out it's called Sherlock and Watson Unfaithful. Thank you for writing this!
| meri47 chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
You typed "kerb", when I think you meant "curb", and there were a few occasions where you did not capitalize the first word in one of the lines.
| kuhekabir chapter 8 . 9/29/2010
interesting story, Thanks for sharing :)
| Law Denvir chapter 8 . 9/14/2010
Ahh. I went into London today, and we had a quick look around Baker Street... Dey don't ave 221b anymore. :'( Me was sad. Dey did have a funny looking police man outside 'The Sherlock Holmes Museum' though. Didn't look right. :(
| deity.of.runes chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Opulence. It's never a good thing, be it stuff, be it words. I can tell you're well read, but there are just too many epithets. It seems as if it couldn't be a bad thing, but really, way too many clichéd metaphors, it kinda ruins the moment. Makes it more like a thoroughly thought-through poetry instead of actual thoughts that someone would think and that makes it look fake.
Another thing - too many 'and's. And not enough interpunction. Your sentances then seem as if you're putting them piece by piece, instead of following a singular thought line. It just makes the whole thing much more tedious to read.
Now, that was for the bad stuff. It's nothing drastic, especially the last thing, it could be corrected by a good beta. I don't mean to discourage you, you had a great plot bunny and all in all I enjoyed the fic, really, just offering some advice on the parts that I, as a reader, found tiring and/or not believable. I guess that what's feedback about. You keep on writing though :)
| wilhelmena chapter 6 . 9/12/2010
Chapters 5 and 6 were heaps better. You did bring the characters closer to the series characters. Sherlock is more like the cold scientist, that he is in the series. When he wants to hurt he really can and when he shows emotions it's so raw that it really hits you. And John "being sorry" scene, was very John.
| Zonya chapter 8 . 9/12/2010
wow great story! please write more when you can
good luck with your exam!