Reviews for Assassins Creed: Retribution Part One
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Booooo!
AstraDragon42 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This is... I don't know, but... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. You should write more, it's pretty good so far.
darkfairy14 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I love it! Alty is AWESOME! Twilight must die!
Caratris Pegason chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
OMG XDDDD You have to write more!
selena1234 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Lol!
I can't wait to read more.
The second thing plaguing this world:
Haters.
Future Dictator Inc chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
You don't how much this made - no it made my life! XD I love it, you should continue this. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Nathaneil's got some balls if he's going to let himself be chased by Twitards!
RandomPerson chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Yes, yes, yes! This is an awesome choice of idea. I'll be waiting for more
RandomPerson chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Yes, yes, yes! This is an awesome choice of idea. I'll be waiting for more
Cheezeburger chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
HAHAHA omg this is halarious. *Clutches sides in laughter* It needed to be done :3
Faith Knox chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Ha ha, a lovely premise for a story! I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter, assuming you're still interested in writing it

If you want some feedback (and yes, I will nitpick, so don't take this personally ) my recommendation is to get inside your character's head a little more. It's one of the most wonderful parts of first-person writing, being able to see what's going on inside someone's head, so I'd love to see some more of our favourite assassin's thoughts on things rather than straight dialogue.

Will love to see where this goes, should you come back to it :)
Kamdem chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
lmao this is an awesome idea,looking foward to the next chapter
Not nameless chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Yes. Altair, you go kick their gay-sparkly-asses. Be the best basses you can be by saving the future!
The Rose Angel chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Go Altaïr! Go kick those sorry spackly vampire FREAKS! :D
FlatlinedGamer chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I love you! Assassin's Creed is awesome and Twilight sucks.
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