|Reviews for Hidden Hearts|
| Yumi999 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Why am I getting the feeling that this story was ALL over the place? I mean I could have been happy with a small summary at the beginning to- oh I don't know, UNDERSTAND WHAT WAS GOING ON! It's mentally jarring when all of the sudden she just snaps, and a divider comes up with Sakura having a four year old! And that also means she had a kid at 16; not that it doesn't happen nowadays, but this IS Sakura Haruno you are using here. Not only would Sakura not cut off all ties with her friends over Sasuke, and while being pregnant. Or I assume she was.
And besides, even she wouldn't be stupid enough to start another life in a different town by herself with an infant growing inside her uterus, with no one she knows and with no money.
I'm going to say this, just because there is an big word count, doesn't mean it's going to be better. I wish you better luck in the future... and also get a beta, it helps with the quality of these stories.
| angel897 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i like it :)
| xXxCherry-ChanxXx chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Awwwwwww! This is an AWESOME! story! I ... There are no words to describe how good this story is!