Reviews for Release Me
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 23 . 5/9
Poor Goku, she tries to help Goten by showing him what his mother was doing to both him and Gohan but Goten still doesn't understand that the one of the reasons she killed Chichi was to protect him and Gohan. Maybe Gohan, Trunks and Vegeta can talk to Goten. Gohan needs to tell Goten that their mother had sold them to someone and they were going to take them away until Bulma stepped in and stopped it. Then tell him that their Dad had to make sure that they would be safe so he took care of the bad men. He also needs to tell Goten that he shouldn't have said that he wish that Goku had stayed dead because he tried to kill herself to give Goten his wish. I wonder who the woman is? Are there 1 or 2 women? Update again soon
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 22 . 2/27
Poor Goten. I wonder if it would do more harm if Goten and Trunks went to stay a lil while where Goku and Vegeta are at? Even though he's young, he needs to be told what his Mom was doing to him and Gohan and what she had done to his Dad. I believe that's the only thing that will stop him from having nightmares. I would think being with Goku would be best because then he could see that Goku loves him and isn't going to do anything to hurt him and never would. Update again soon
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 21 . 12/24/2015
Poor Go
PixelezOtaku chapter 20 . 10/23/2015
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE!I swear,if I could,I woud have Goku have a deal with a powerful saiyan god to restore his power and the god put a little twist on Goku's restoration that Goku didn't know about and was irreversable
BringingYaoiBack chapter 20 . 10/18/2015
Whew! So I just found this fic and power read the entire thing right now! I apologize for not leaving a review for every chapter, but I was entranced and didn't want to stop reading! So this is my mega round-up review of everything I read!

First, I was mortified by all the unthinkable things Goku had to endure, but I thank you for staying away from too much graphic descriptions of the rapes. I usually stop reading if rape is heavily involved in a storyline, but you didn't try to embellish it or make it the focus of attention. I'm very glad on this point.

I'm glad that Vegeta had been trying to help Goku, even though his methods were questionable at first (throwing her off a balcony? Come on, Vegeta!), but when he let her enter his mind and see that she could trust him, I was elated that he was able to drop his defenses like that. I was a little saddened that Goku wasn't the one to finish off Yanish, but as she was poisoned, what can you do? And now he has sworn to her to protect her! But yikes, Goku is scary when she wants to be! I was surprised that she killed Chi-Chi, but more surprised that Gohan was like "oh well, she deserved it!" I know she did some awful things, but she's still his mother!

Speaking of surprises, what the fuck was with rapist Yamcha?! I can't believe he went to such lengths to find Goku! I have a soft spot in my heart for the guy, but in this fic, I wasn't too sad to see him go. Well sad that he had been reduced to that as a character, but in the context, no, not really.

I'm wondering what will happen with the Destroyer too. I'm curious as to whether it will turn out to be Broly or an OC. I'm hoping Goku will get her chance to put him down like a dog and regain some of her confidence back.

And we've learned that Vegeta doesn't truly hate Goku and that he has been tempted by her in the past. I'm exceedingly curious as to how this plot thread will unfurl! I'm sure Bulma will have plenty to say about it if anything does happen! But I'm also hoping that it doesn't come down to her calling Goku a whore too and dying. I feel like even with whatever growing feelings he has for Goku, Vegeta still has at least respect for her in this story in that he hasn't cheated so far.

But this whole scenario with Frank and Chi-Chi selling off her kids? One, I'm not sure how that's even possible, but I'm going with it, and two, if he's coming just now for the kids and Goku had been gone for months already...what cells was she giving Frank as payment? Or was just the sex enough? I was a little unclear on this part.

In the end, I've enjoyed what I've seen so far and will follow to see where this goes! Nicely done so far and I hope you get the chance to write more soon!
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 20 . 10/17/2015
Well I wonder what Goku is gonna do when she finds out that Chichi sold their children to a crazy man for their DNA? I'm almost positive that the man who's trying to get her kids will be dead soon. Update again soon
Guest chapter 19 . 10/10/2015
Can you make a good end please i want to know the rest and done with happy ending
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 19 . 7/18/2015
Well I'm glad that Gohan found out about Chichi cheating on Goku. How will Goten react when Gohan tells him about his mom cheating on his dad? Wonder who messed with medical supplies on that ship? Update again soon
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 18 . 5/1/2015
I'm flattered that you used the idea in some way and I freaking love your angle a whole lot better. I'm just hoping that Gohan and Goten will forgive Goku for what happened. Where will Vegeta take Goku so that she can turn into the great ape? What will Bulma and the others think about Goku killing Chichi? Will they say that she deserved it for what she had done? Ok I also have to ask, will something happen to Bulma? I don't want her to get hurt since she was trying to be helpful and is scared that Vegeta is gonna leave her. Update again soon
Guest chapter 17 . 4/23/2015
This is a great story, I really like how you have made Vegeta take care of Goku. making Goku a girl and showing the problems he is having adjusting to all that has happened. You really have done a great job with this and I hope you continue with this story I will be looking for more.
pannybaby123 chapter 17 . 4/19/2015
great chapter write more soon!
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 17 . 4/19/2015
That "BITCH" Chichi, I wish that Gohan knew the instant transmission and he showed up in Chichi's room when she was in the middle of being the whore she is. How would she explain that away? Also wished that Frank would open up his mouth and tell Gohan everything about Chichi has and is still doing especially giving him the blood sample from Goku and was going to get a sample of his and Goten's for him. Then of course he needs to kill Frank to keep him from saying anything to the press or cops and tell the whore that he is taking Goten and that they are moving to Bulma's and if he ever sees her around Goten or him then he will not hesitate to kill her. That's what I'd say anyway lol. Update again soon
Guest chapter 16 . 4/2/2015
Awesome
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 16 . 3/29/2015
Well I wonder if Goku will be able to fight off the "Destroyer"? Does Gohan and Goten know that their mother cheated on their dad and more or less caused all of the things that has happened to Goku? Do they still live with or have anything to do with her? Well now that Vegeta has got Goku to let go and embrace his Saiyan instincts, will he be able to fight for his life? Update again soon
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 15 . 3/22/2015
I'm glad that Yarnish is dead and that Goku is not gonna die from the poison. I hope that Goku takes Dende's advice and learns to trust atleast his sons, Vegeta, Trunks and Bulma. Update again soon
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