Reviews for Finding Talent
SoUsay234 chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
Original epilogue. Awesome.
CarmillaD chapter 4 . 12/19/2010
Ouch, that was harsh. But looking from Mercedes' POV, I kinda understand her: Looks like she considers Rachel's fling with Puck something unhealthy, and being interrupted in an important moment by her so she could rant about Puck's antics even when they aren't exclusive must've been the last thing she could stand. OK, let's see what happens next
CarmillaD chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
Wait, now I'm confused: How did they ended up in Mercedes' place? For a moment I thought they lived together, but with those lines about the floor looks like only her lives there.

"I arched her back off the floor, which suddenly felt very cold against my hot skin."

"I threw the shirt over her shoulder."

Hum, considering Rachel's narrating everything, I guess those should be "him"

OK, let's keep reading
CarmillaD chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
Oh hoho, Mercedes, you go girl! WOW, this time it was even hotter, and the last lines were awesome, ha, ha. Let's see what happens next
CarmillaD chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Hahaha, Puck, Puck, always so forward XD. RAWR, that was hot. However, in this line: "[...]He flashed black eyes to mine before moving with excruciating unhurriedness.[...]" shouldn't be "dark eyes" instead of "black eyes"? Like is mentioned in the story (And we know), Puck's eyes are hazel, although sometimes they look darker, even green. OK, let's keep reading
fresch chapter 4 . 9/23/2010
Oh my goodness. This is so sad! Obviously Noah and Rachel have great chemistry, and even with teh disclaimer "no strings attached sex" it always turns into more. And it's not like Rachel CHOSE to cozy up to Finn! I can't believe Noah! But poor Mercedes. Rachel really shouldn't have interrupted that. Especially since she had a feeling about Craig's feelings to begin...Please update SOON!
Jenn6891 chapter 4 . 9/23/2010
Oh noah please don't :(

I don't care if they're exclusive or not he's doing this on purpose of hurting rachel
shezz05 chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
this is awesome! love it, can't wait for more rachel and puck!

pls update soon and keep up the great work!

cheers
GoGleekYourself chapter 3 . 9/19/2010
i love it! seriously, soo good.
KatAngel16 chapter 3 . 9/19/2010
HAHAHA! YES! That was ana amzing chapter! It was steamy and hilarious! Please write more soon! :)
puckleberrylarkftw chapter 3 . 9/19/2010
Kurt walking in on Noah tied to the kitchen table was freaking hilarious ... not to mention this chapter was way HAWT! More, more!
Jsct chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
loving it! please update soon!
AmericanGirl420 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
There has been a serious lack of smut lately. Thank you so much for this little goody! Loved it.
KatAngel16 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
YAY! SMUT! This was... wow, it was just wow and I know I want more! It's just, well, well written smut. Very well written!
puckleberrylarkftw chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
this is SO awesome! you seriously need to write a sequel or make it a multi-chap ... please!
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