i love this!

woah. EPIC! YES I LOVE HICCUP SO MUCH.

loool. love this.

loool. god, love it.

instructions unclear, accidentally rewatched the whole movie. might rewatch the entire trilogy

Toothless smothered by cats is such a lovely mental image.
I like that you don't gloss over the hardship of healing and recovery. The movie didn't show us much of Hiccup's adjustment to losing a foot, so his frustration here is an interesting element.

My god... I know you probably don't read these anymore, but this is without a doubt, the GREATEST HTTYD fanfic I have ever read. I loved the plot, the characters, the place, I loved it all. I'm so depressed that it's over now. It was a journey. Congratulations, and a giant chef's kiss for this whole thing.

I love the multifaceted narrative you're crafting.
You also do a good job of portraying Hiccup as a teenage boy, realistically being in-character.

you are an author without equal. I yearn for more of this!

For some reason i read the line
\::Nooooo...:: It came out as a pained moan. It stirred no sympathy from the rogue Viking./

As
\::Nooooo...:: It came out as a pained moan. It stirred no sympathy from the vogue Riking./

So either im dyslexic, tired or i need to relearn how to read :/

xD

that ending I'm crying... that was so mean

This story is amazing and heartwarming

Ahhh this was such a wonderful chapter. Definitely one of my favourites so far. It was so long haha but Ioved it! I think you did the transition really well. I’d partly been expecting Astrid to sneak into the meeting and try and kill Toothless so this was such a great contrast.

Loved a Toothless glaring at the axe. This is such a wonderful story, so well written.

Amazing story :D