|Reviews for But He Talks Like a Gentleman|
| RobinsArt chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
So, yeah, I tried to leave without comment, but I couldn't.
This was truly great writing. I felt the same way the characters did. I left, and I felt upset, and I was confused about how I felt, and I tried to stop reading, tried to do something else, but I went back to it, and know I just feel so confused. You sucked me in and made me feel. Congradulations, you made me feel.
You are truly a good writer.
| jthe4003 chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
it was heartbreaking thinking of carlos in that much pain,
This was so well written and envoked so much emotion,
i understand how you wanted to end it at the second chapter, would have been good, but the 3rd really closed it off well.
Could i get the link for the carlos/james porn?
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
What in the hell. Wow, just wow. It really was different, dark. Strangely enough I couldn't find myself to resent Kendall, even after putting Carlos through that. It was just ughh. Now to make myself feel better I'm gonna read some Kenlos fluff and then go to bed cuz its nearly 4 in the morning and I'm not going to bed feeling like this.
| Bomes chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
Wow. This is something I don't see usually. Beautifully written, full of sadness and art at the same time... It was great. Although the Chapter 3 it's full dispensable, I wish could be more stories like that. Great! :)
| KamesCarganLuv chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I want to see the Janes and Carlos porn link please ;)
| alonelytabookid chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
What the asdfghjkl fuck did I just read.
My heart is just literally recovering from this fic. It might take a few fluffy BTR fics but holy fuck, man.
Pardon the language, please.
It's interesting for me that Kendall's actions were of his certain mentality. That kind of saved me, because if his actions were really of his own pleasure then oh my gosh, fuck me, I'd be a crying girl right now.
Wonderfully written. /3
| Hero chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
Whoa this just got really interesting.
| angelzcry chapter 3 . 2/11/2012
this was AMAZING! like actually I'm a big kenlos shipper but all the fics are so cookie cutter. This is the only(multichap, the only other one was a one shot) fic that I've seen where kendall knight, the usual hero, was the monster. It was an exciting change. Bravo!
| Fallenangelqueen chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
| The Brat Prince chapter 3 . 12/6/2011
I'm pretty sure this whole thing traumatized me, but in a good way, if that makes sense? Like. Well. I'm probably never going to be able to read/write kenlos again, but I feel like that's worth it, because you write so beautifully. I literally could not tear my eyes away from this; it was so evocative and messed up and at the same time it felt...true? Rape is such a hard subject to tackle, especially when you're dealing with a perpetrator who is someone the victim cares about (friend/boyfriend/etc) because all the lines get blurred. I- actually, okay, I should say this, because I hate when people say this- but I almost wish you hadn't included the part about psychosis because it makes the ending feel neat when everything else was a trainwreck in slow motion. That said, it was still a WONDERFUL ending, and I don't want to marginalize it in any way.
The entire bit about Quetzalcoatl won my heart; I've been trying to work something about that into fic forever but it never has sit right- this does. This was perfection.
djaskpajf I want to say more, but this entire thing has rendered me speechless. Gorgeous. Creepy. Terrific.
| LoveInTheEyes chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Wow. I'm left speechless. That is probably one of the most moving and beautifully written fanfictions I've ever read. You writing is so great, I love the metaphors that you use and how well you describe things. You are a beautiful writer. The story, I loved it, even though it was dark and depressing. I was drawn to the darkness. Your words affected me greatly, I felt Carlos' pain and all of his feelings. This was just such a strong piece and you could have a future in writing. The piece was heartbreakingly beautiful.
| cherrysnowflakes98 chapter 3 . 7/29/2011
This is absoultley...indescribbale. Everything is just so beautifully written. Rape and the phycolgical affects are hard to capture, but you did it, wonderfully. You are a great authour!
| Andre chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
This was one of the darkest, most powerful stories evarrrr:
How carlos basically mentally breaks down, Kendal goes crazier.. Logans just oblivious to everything.
I didn't understand some stuff though ; when Carlos tells James not to touch him, and u talk about a twisted bone and muscle- explain?
&i would really like it if you continued...
| Jasonx666 chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
What a fucked up story, could easily see this as an upcoming drama that everyone would love and it'd get an Oscar. It really puts things into perspective with a situation I'm dealing with at school but it definitely isn't what's going on in this story
| Sir RCCS chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
Wow dat was gud. So is dis da last chapter?