Reviews for The human experience
stupidfrillycurtains chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Nice start so far, I enjoyed your other one shot between Bella and Edward.. Just one tiny thing, you might think about breaking up the larger paragraphs a bit? Sounds good so far!
folm chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
So well written- I can't believe English isn't your first language. Plus, I think you really capture that excitement and desperation when you are underage and without id!
wattle1 chapter 5 . 6/11/2011
I am enjoying you story, keep it up.
sarahlouise80 chapter 5 . 4/16/2011
so glad edward found soon
Camilla10 chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
I have just started reading this but I am here to know if you will continue it. Otherwise there is no point for me to read the chapters already posted.


PS) I only read Canon and AU, no AH.
Puttenham chapter 5 . 10/12/2010
OK, enough is enough. Edward should just give in and change her. Its really too much trouble keeping Bella out of trouble. So how about a red-hot "changing" scene? Not all clinical like in the syringes! Just bite her Edward!
kitkatr chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
Looking forward to more!
kitkatr chapter 4 . 10/11/2010
Yes- Edward to the rescue! I just love him!
kitkatr99 chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
Poor Bella - who is this creepy guy? I am so afraid for her!
kitkatr chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
Ut oh - what will the girls do to kill time? All that alcohol doesn not have them thinking straight! Can't wait for more!
kitkatr chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I think Bella may get into some trouble! Loving your story!
marlijn chapter 4 . 10/8/2010
not smart from ed, please update soon :( i lovee it
Rinou chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
Well I don't have anything to say, it's well written, and everything. I'm just wondering how it's gonna evoluate. keep going
eytedrfghjiolhg528ddfxcde chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
so awesome
duchess0amy chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
Bella hasn't been dubbed the danger magnet for nothing.
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