Reviews for Too Deep
misundersnape chapter 11 . 9/26/2010
Ooh... a 'Choose your own Adventure'... pity I am too late. Of course, it kinda sounds like he's already sexually abusing him sometimes, but I would have gone for that - forcing him to give oral would be torture - what better way to demonstrate just how much Severus is at his mercy and His servant. But this is T rated, maybe it wouldn't fit.

Anyway, the decision has been made - I'll go see what you decided.

Luna Lark chapter 13 . 9/26/2010
whoa! what happened? does that spell make severus have visions of voldemort or something? jeeezzz! i hope you update! i would LOVE to find out what that spell did to him...oi! creepppy!
alwaysimagined chapter 11 . 9/26/2010
Voldemort could let the other Deatheaters in on the fun. I feel like the best/worst ones to invite would be Pettigrew, Macnair, the Carrows, Greyback, and the Lestranges. Having Lucius Malfoy betray Severus (or rather, enjoy betraying Severus on the Dark Lord's orders) is rather overdone.

Though I do like skaterkep's idea. Maybe some sort of spell that not only makes Severus instantly flash back to Voldemort's various treatments of him, but also makes him re-experience them. OR, Voldemort could cast a spell that allows him to sort of phantom touch Severus anytime he wants, anywhere he wants. Does that make sense?

The Order should find out about this at some point and not do anything about it, but I don't know how to make that work. Maybe Sirius already knows because Voldemort used to treat Snape this way and he heard other Deatheaters talk about how unfair it was that Snape not only got to spend a lot of "private time" with the Dark Lord, but also got off scot-free. Imagine Dumbledoer's reaction if he found that out...

That last suggestion probably overstepped what you were asking for. My bad. I just let my imagination run away with me.
Severinus chapter 11 . 9/25/2010
Hmm... How should Voldemort punish Severus for his defiance? I have to say, I really like skaterkep's suggestion more than anything that I can come up with. It would certainly make for an interesting read. Brilliant chapter as always. Take care!
snapsforsnape chapter 11 . 9/25/2010
Hmmmmm. I'm trying to think of something that you have not written before. Ooooo. What about some kind of spell that Voldemort can activate at anytime? Like during class, or dinner, or Order Meetings. Maybe some kind of curse that destroys equilibrium or disrupts motor function. You have the ability to come up with anything imagineable so I know I will be happy with anything you dream up : ) Can't wait to read. Hopefully it'll be up before we leave for the airport. *Wink wink, nudge nudge*
The Half-Blood Princesss chapter 11 . 9/25/2010
Make harry see Snape being tortured and make him tell Dumbly and Dumbly not believe him. :)
LilyLunaEtheline chapter 11 . 9/24/2010
Well done. I have no idea how Voldemort should punish Severus, but it should be painful. Torture? I don't know


Luna Lark chapter 11 . 9/24/2010
wooooooww! severus fought back! yeahhhh! i'm really glad he at least tried to stand up for himself...i feel like voldie would just whip him with a special whip...or use him as a cutting board (squeaks). that makes me feel scared for what's about to happen
Kpo chapter 10 . 9/23/2010
I detect a bit of you in this story...

You know what I'm About to say... More por favor. We need some spy action! :)
Luna Lark chapter 10 . 9/23/2010
dang...dumbledore believed snape...not good...yikes...that means he doesn't know what severus is going through...
Tiph Aileen chapter 9 . 9/23/2010
Je sens que Voldemort va encore faire souffrir Severus...Non ! Mais si...

C'est superbe, mais pour une fille aussi impatiente que moi, ça va être dûr d'attendre, bien que les mises à jour soient rapides
Luna Lark chapter 9 . 9/22/2010
oh my goshhh! this is just tooo goooddd!
Severinus chapter 9 . 9/22/2010
I wonder how ol' Voldemort found out about Harry Occlumency lessons? My guess is he's discovered the connection between them and was somehow able to figure it out (but I'm probably way off course with this one). But in any case, I can't wait to find out what happens to dear Severus. Cheers!
LilyLunaEtheline chapter 9 . 9/22/2010
Well done. How did Voldemort find out? Poor Severus :( He just can't get a break


LilyLunaEtheline chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
Well done. I feel the need to ask... did Voldemort rape Severus?


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