|Reviews for Jonabee Fanfic|
| Shinkicker chapter 14 . 5/12/2012
Lol, fun story. Is Azumanga Daioh anything like you've portrayed here? I shall have to go watch it if true!
Hope to see more some day!
| DragonSword35d chapter 14 . 2/7/2011
This is a great story. The only issue I have with it is that I am fairly certain that Sakaki is a Family name, not a given one. I could be wrong, but it has been bugging me.
| Daniel Thomas Stack chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
Ranma was slowly but surely relaxing, as her hand reluctantly reformed from the claw shape it had used while latched onto Yukari's door for deer life, as she lay back on the beach, enjoying the hot sun as it beat down on her back.
A Run on sentence but you've got the wrong deer dear. When you use as to describe a simultaneous event more than once in a sentence its a pretty good sign you can rephrase it as at least two sentences.
Osaka and Yomi both seemed to consider this, while Sakaki, seemingly unnoticed, began to slink off towards the stares.
I'm guessing stairs unless they are somehow slinking off to people watching them intently.
Check up on the pooch. Everyone went to the beach but Weebee was still in Tokyo wasn't he? Well? If he didn't consider the advice about stealing from Nabiki who knows what trouble he might be up to now?
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| Daniel Thomas Stack chapter 13 . 1/10/2011
Weebee. I think you are forgetting something really important. You see before when you stole the dog you were just stealing it from Chiyo. Now if you take the dog you are knowingly and willingly stealing from Nabiki. Do you really want to see what the consequences of that would be like?
Spokavriel yahoo. com
| Daniel Thomas Stack chapter 2 . 1/7/2011
Weebee? Taking the dog? WHY?
| tuatara chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
This story is really rather extraordinary. Not only does it offer a wholly satisfying, pitch-perfect merger of Ranma and Azumanga, it also manages to provide a healthy dose of genuine pathos as well. Such fantastic work. I've lost track of all the highlights, as there have just been way too many...though one of the very best bits is certainly Kasumi of the Musk. Awesome.
This is easily one of the most successful crossovers I've ever seen. It stays true to the tones of both series while still allowing the Ranma cast room to have matured...somewhat. They're still a bunch of nutbars, happily...which is why they mesh so well with the Azumanga cast.
It does seem that Ranma's the only one who's really gotten a raw deal, but what's new, right? And at least she has so many people in her life at this point who truly care for her. I really enjoy all of the moments between her and Sakaki, as they make quite a convincing parent and child. What else? Oh, it was nice to see Akane actually appear after being mentioned so many times. I was starting to wonder what was up with that. Also, you came up with a pretty distinctive (albeit depressing) route to getting Ranma stuck as a female. Kudos.
I love this one and greatly look forward to the next chapter...whenever that may be. Beautiful, hilarious job!
| Lousy Poet Automaton chapter 3 . 12/27/2010
I want to like this because the concept is really fun... But something is off regarding the overall feel. It feels too much like a Ranma story, and not enough like Azumanga Daioh. I mean, the parts where Sakaki interacts with Ranma characters are fine, but when she's in school with other Azu characters, it ought to *feel* more like Azumanga Daioh, with the curse just being another gag, and all things considered, probably one that the girls would get over pretty quick compared to Osaka's everyday spacey cookiness.
| deathgeonous chapter 14 . 12/19/2010
This is a great and funny slice of life fic that I really find myself enjoying, so thanks to both of you for writing this, bye for now.
| Dumbledork chapter 14 . 12/17/2010
YAY! An update. Thx for that. Can't wait for more.
| DisMinded chapter 14 . 12/16/2010
This is... oddly charming. It's well written. The dialogue is interesting. You've made me care about the characters, especially matriarch Ranma (though you've really outdone yourself capturing all Nerimites and making them sympathetic, even Ukyo and Konatsu who I could see being demonized in another fic). The dynamic between characters is great as well. All I can say is keep up the good work and please continue with this story.
| deitarionSSokolow chapter 14 . 12/16/2010
Decent, but nothing specific leaps out at me.
| Mizuno Tenshi2 chapter 13 . 12/15/2010
Cute little fic! If you decide to update soon, I'll decide not to hunt you guys down! j/k!
| Armastama chapter 13 . 12/1/2010
Rather hilarious. This is one of the better older generation fics I've seen yet. Hope to see this continued.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 13 . 9/22/2010
Slowly, but surely. Chiyo-chan is pulled into the maelstrom of chaos. Thanks for the laughs and chuckles. Chuckles because, real men don't giggle. Not that I'm a real man or something. For all people know, I could be a Penguin in disguise as a human.
| Dumbledork chapter 13 . 9/18/2010
Always nice to reread this story. I absolutely love it, but I still think Ranma shouldn't get the mushrooms... or at least make it so that the mushrooms don't get longer than 18 cm.