Fuck you, you sanctimonious cocksucker.

Oof, I find myself really scraping the barrel by returning to read this, so to speak. It's a mediocre fic but I'm amazed how many other stories are outright a steaming pile of garbage. At least this one is satisfying for its Schadenfreude.

The most enjoyable Harry forced to another universe I've ever read!

So much better then the angst ridden pathetic edge lord versions of this I've seen.

1. I understand that you write as fast as you can to put your ideas into words while they're still bouncing within your reach. I do the same. It's just you're supposed to go over again after your done and straighten things out. This text missed this step, so I personally feel that marking this as "complete" is a false advertising.
2. Even barring that, everything is too rushed. He speaks with goblins on one page, walks past cheating Ginny the next, goblins are back after doing their work immediately after. It's no good to try to stick to character perspective if you're gonna rush-skip past so much content.
3. I already see where you're going and I've read pretty much the same story before (which was actually finished): Order summoned alternative!Harry to fight their battle right after he was done with his own Voldi, so he was understandably pissed. Why would I tread the same ground in a fic that's only half-done? Thanks, but no thanks.

I know it's been years - but fwiw, loving this again after those years; and I like short chapters, always did.

What a pointless "chapter". You want to write a sequel? Write a sequel; here's the first chapter. People will read it (or not) based on how much they liked this story. You know what people DON'T like?

Cliffhangers.

And ending a story with a cliffhanger for no particular reason does nothing but piss people off.

To whomever is reading comment before they start reading the story: be warned - the story ends in a cliffhanger and the sequel isn't complete (and probably never will be). However, Chapter 56 is just a setup for the sequel and Chapter 57 is a "teaser" from the (unfinished) sequel so, if you make it through Chapter 55 (which isn't a given, considering the poor grammar), you should stop there.

Holy shit! I just spent my time on a rubbish! Un-fucking-believable. I shouldn't have given this poor-written babbling a chance. Now, I have officially become a retard for falling for a retard's trick.

Fuck the hotel, man. These bloody bastards give the most mediocre service and charge you ridiculously for a decent one.

That was a little cringe, my liege

Not gonna lie. That was a little cringe, my liege

And he turned into... A lesbian!

Came back to this, loving it.

A very amusing story and a great dark Dumbledore! Very well written and an engaging story!