Reviews for Wonderwall: The Super Squint in the Wonder Woman
Nancy Haugen chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
May 25, 2013
I just discovered your Fan Fiction. Your writing style is wonderful. The best I've read on Fan Fiction and I have read a lot of them. I love the way you write the M sex. So descriptive in a unique way I can see it happening. It's smutty in a classy way.
When I read B&B's sexual encounters you write them in a way that I don't feel like I'm reading porn.
Thank you I enjoy every thing you write.
kikki hope chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Yay. Write more, always more.


Dancingfool5 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Freakin' fantastic. Great writing, lots of great smut. And I love the ending... video footage, ha ha!
MadDelight chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
first of all, might i say, one of my favorite episodes ever and i always wished that something more wouldve happened at the end!

(fangirl gush over)

love this, because it's so true! : ""Wait. You had room in that costume for that enormous gun that you shot me with, Bones. But you're telling me there was no room left in that costume for an itty bitty flash drive?"""

""Their hips ground against each other impatiently as a primal subtext to their conversation; providing promise of the release that they both craved."""

squintese sex, really? i mean tasteful, but still, really?

(just messin with ya)

:hides eyes during the very sexual experience about to embark after the word 'fuckable':

""X-rated Justice League wardrobe malfunction.""- i came out of hiding just to read this line, hilarious!

although the "genre" did scar me a bit. (id explain why but lets just, ahem, not go there) the last line made up for it entirely!

"""The angle of the camera will result in mostly obscured images of the lower halves of our bodies. However, I believe that Cam will be able to make a positive ID from your ass."""

... never even thought of that. :D
FoxPhile chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Have you never heard of spew warnings? This, on a scale of one to five, needs to hit about 20!

The "rinse and repeat" section was amazing. Alliteratively exceptional and at the same time, well, who knew 64 dollar words could be so...HOT?

And then, just as the action begins to truly reach a fever...they discuss panty lines. PANTY LINES!

Seeley Wallbanger! Bwahahahaha!

One of the alltime great last lines in fanfic: "However, I believe that Cam will be able to make a positive ID from your ass."

Yes, you must, MUST do more like this. Too, too funny!
Animagus-Steph chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Oh, wow! You got the banter down perfectly! I enjoyed this for so many reasons, but your characterization was really quite wonderful! I could easily see this episode devolving (or, you know, evolving) into what you've written here.

Excellent work!
Live4Sunshine chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
OMG, yes you need to write more in this genre. I cracked up laughing at the end when Bones said that about the positive ID. :D
Beth Cain chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Definitely write MORE!
elm377 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
You should definitely write more in this genre...

Damn that was HAWT!

But not too explicit either... just the absolute perfect medium!
CSINaomi chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
quite absolutely YES you should continue in this, shall we say, genre! Nicely done!


SmilingSarahJean chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I will be thinking about that flashdrive comment for days lol. You are great at working in clever one-liners in amongst the down and dirty parts, which surprisingly makes me feel less guilty reading these kind of things. Not like I have ever let it stop me in the past. You have a talent here that cannot be wasted. ;-). Ahhhh Cam IDing him from his ass lol

Thanks for a great read!
Luvedit chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Ahaha I love your ending about Cam identifying Booth by his ASS it was fantastic! Also hot yes...hahah
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
great story
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
awesome! the writers of "bone" could take lessons from you. you have great writing ability. FYI, the season 6 premiere was , in my opinion, very poorly written. I wonder how different it would have been in your expert hands
bonesparticulat chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Very sexy and fun. Thank you.
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