|Reviews for Roseline's thoughts at the end of chapter 2|
| lordheaven chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
very interesting chapter. I was moved with the story - the kind emotion flowing from it. You do not need more to express emotions and you seem good at it. Even in the other story (in the twilight area) you did excellent with emotions. I think you should continue to explore that (in this or other stories). One thing though, do review your text before publishing it this way you could avoid small mistakes.
| EVERanOptimist chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Nice job! You can tell how much Rosaleen loves Lily. I was kind of disappointed that you didn't include the fight they had but the story was really good.