Reviews for Flustered
MelissaRM chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
You could totally turn this into a story
kim chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
I like this story
uyay chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Ummm, I'd take five over four, though I could see her not dating...
Shadow Silvertongue chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Hahahahahahahaha, OMG! Naru-clowns? Lin in Superman's spandex suit? LMFAO! That is just bloody hilarious. I totally loved this story, it was amazing and really made my day. Picturing Naru dressed as a clown and Lin dressed as Superman is gonna continually make me crack up laughing all day! Thank you for writing such an amazing story. :)
Step of Faith chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
You did a very good job on this fic! ) I thoroughly enjoyed it! Keep up the good work! _
gemmagirl chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
i vote 5... Lin is just too sexy for his own good
Blood Red Gun chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Can't wait to read the next one must have lin X mai!
light ladybug chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
nicely done i love it!
Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
-grins- This was both cute and funny! The dream and the image of Lin reading Twilight were to priceless for words! "Superman, Mai? Really?" XDD
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
So kawaii! You write so well, thanks for clearing stuff up!
Kurotsuki Hikari chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Wow! I love it! I'm dying to read more, I know this is a one-shot but you really really really should make a sequel or something!
Wild Wolf Princess chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Very cute and well-written. I enjoyed reading this very much, though I kind of see Lin more as Batman rather than Superman (going by looks, not temperament). A Naru-clown is probably the most disturbing thing I've ever read in fan-fiction, too. Excellent use of punctuation, grammar, and paragraph structure. A pleasure to the eyes as well as to read. Thank you for sharing!
Kate Linton chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
You are fantastic at writing Ghost Hunt fan fiction! And you really made Lin perfectly. If you write another with Lin and Mai, I would make Naru really jealous and angry at Lin. You're an exultant writer, so keep at it!
spontaneous-rainbow chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
xD Thank you! I love Mai's sense of humour! 'Hello to you too, '' xD *sings* Ahh, Lin's, too sexy for this story, too sexy for this story, so sexy it hurts! Yeeahh! *does a crazy dance*
TuTsXxX chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Its so cute...good job! Keep up the good work! I love LinXMai! Hope to read more from you in the future! ;)
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