|Reviews for Burn|
| MyJournalSecrets1 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
this should be intresting!
| ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
i love it omg i really do i love u and plz plz plz plz keep writing bye
| Throughmyeyes19 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
i love it so far!
| TotallyTwilight98 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Really good! I'm looking forward to more!
| EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
loved it! Write more soon!
| I.wanna.be.like.Rosalie1264 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
wow i think this is going to be a great story the first chapter was fantastic i cant wait to read more please update soon! x
| lynne0731 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
| jeasterl chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
careful of wrong word choices
felled (what happens when a tree is chopped down) felt (is the sense of touch)
pronouns (part of speech i, you, they, him) pronounce is to speak
potential in the story but please review what you write before posting it