Reviews for Two Hearts Are Better Than One
Guest chapter 4 . 8/6
I Wanna Kill Larry Koopa Because Rape Is Wrong... Or Make Larry Try To Do It With Morton You Could Make Morton Stop Him From Raping Him Or Larry Could Be Like Eh Fuck It... And Not Rape Morton At All Or Anyone Else Expect Ludwig
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25
VVV Fuck off, buddy. This is incest AND pedophilia written about characters from a game for CHILDREN. You're honestly fucked in the head if you think that a story about 8 year olds having an orgy is considered "hot". I'm perfectly fine with gay relationships, but a gay relationship between two 8 year old twins?

You're SOOOOOO fucked up.

~A guy who doesn't get an erection from turtles fucking each other. (Aka a normal person)
Noxella206 chapter 1 . 7/16
This story is awsome your stories are awsome don't let anyone tell you different. (Insert rude guest below)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
What the actual fuck is wrong with you? Do you not realize they're both FUCKING KIDS!? If I was your dad, and I found out that you write shit like this, I would put you up for adoption instantly. Assuming that your biological dad hasn't already put you in a foster home, you fucking weirdo. I hope one day, as you're writing another fanfiction like this, you get a phone call from your doctor, informing you that you now have prostate cancer (From taking it in the ass too much.), and the rest of your life is filled with pain. Okay, so I don't actually want that last part to happen, but I hope your computer explodes, you sick fuck.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11
I Mean In Chapter 5 Can You Make Roy And Morton Have Feelings For Eachother And Confess And Make Roy And Morton Do Some Goood Ol' Hanky-Panky! You Know Make Em Have Some XXX And Larry To Apologise To Ludwig And He Apologies Back And Make Them Fall In Love Again And Also Make Wendy And Bowser Jr Fall In Love And They All Apoligise To Everyone For Being Absolute Bitches And That They All Find Out Their Relationships Even Bowser And The Others Realizes How Much They Truly Love Eachother Then They Become Protagonists And They All Live Happily Ever After! Da Fucking End Yay!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11
Instead Of Bed It Said Bead Spelling Error! Can You Please Remove The Parts Larry Where Larry Rapes Morton And Make Larry Have Sex With Nobody Else But Ludwig Okay! Sorry Just After What Larry Did To Morton And Had An Affair Apparently Wants To Make Me Wanna Stop Him... Makes Me To Hurt Him... Makes Me Want To Kill Him... So Don't Make Larry Rape Anyone So Just Think Of A Different Ending Of This Chapter With No Raping No Affairs And No Raping And No Affairs In Any Other Chapters Oh And In Chapter 5 Can You Make Roy Hqve Feeling
Guest chapter 2 . 7/11
You Made A Spelling Error Larry Was Supposed To Say "But Somehow You Fixed Lemmy And Iggy" But Instead You Accidentally Typed In "But Somehow You Fixed Larry And Iggy"
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10
6 years totally isn't an incredibly long hiatus
Guest chapter 4 . 4/26
Why did Larry Cheat on poor Ludwig? I'm too lazy to read this fanfic
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21
OMFG.
This is a legal to love your sibling
Guest chapter 4 . 2/4
When is ch5 coming out I love the story line
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
Please make chapter 5 I have been waiting
Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2016
That's gay!
ytp dora fan 7 chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Instead of slash, I think you should do a Zor/Astrid pairing, along with Zav/Zarla(bad day gone worse fanfic), Zor/Clara, Ludwig/Astrid, Roy/Astrid, and make sure that the emo zeti calls Astrid 'honey', while zavok marsh calls zarla 'zarl'. thanx
Guest chapter 4 . 10/16/2015
Well, this chapter was actually the most shocking of all the chapters before. It was perfect as always but damn, Larry is getting pretty scary. Nevertheless it was a fantastic fanfiction again and I hope someday the Story will continue :)
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