Reviews for Two Hearts Are Better Than One
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23
Please make chapter 5 I have been waiting
Guest chapter 2 . 2/10
That's gay!
ytp dora fan 7 chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Instead of slash, I think you should do a Zor/Astrid pairing, along with Zav/Zarla(bad day gone worse fanfic), Zor/Clara, Ludwig/Astrid, Roy/Astrid, and make sure that the emo zeti calls Astrid 'honey', while zavok marsh calls zarla 'zarl'. thanx
Guest chapter 4 . 10/16/2015
Well, this chapter was actually the most shocking of all the chapters before. It was perfect as always but damn, Larry is getting pretty scary. Nevertheless it was a fantastic fanfiction again and I hope someday the Story will continue :)
Guest chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
This was simply beautyful
copperling 6 chapter 4 . 9/29/2015
Morticia Copper Jr. here. Don't you ever do this s-e-x story to my future-dad Morton Koopa junior. Do you know that me and my dad are softies, why can't you do Larry and Raven from Teen Titans Go!, Princess Clara from Drawn Together and Zor from sonic lost world and also my future-uncle Ludvig von Koopa and Astrid Hofferson from Dreamworks Dragons. so either you and the other authors make those stories or my future-grandpa Bowser will bring your stories on and we'll rip it up. plz
Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Holy shit this needs to be contenued for the lord don't stop writing
starwolfleader14 chapter 3 . 7/22/2015
Can u please try an mpreg fan fiction between Iggy and Ludwig and I don't care who is preggers (I prefer Ludwig but I don't care) but I would like one because there is none I can't do one because I don't know how or have the internet only laptop please also love this one
Preston0605 chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
Why do people may the koopalings gay they would never be gay and my favourite one are in the story
Ewww chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
In my opinion this is gay
guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
could you pls pls pls do astrid hofferson from dragons and ludwig
Guest chapter 4 . 4/17/2015
wtf
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24/2015
Honestly, I'm impressed. That's one of the best story I've read ! Your chapters are soo complete and intringuing. There's a precise theme for each one. Too sad Ludwig has to go. :'( Anyway, I love the fic, I wish I could constuct a story that's a real deal like yours.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/19/2015
This is just wrong dude
Ep chapter 4 . 2/9/2015
Are you gonna keep this story going. I really love it
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