|Reviews for The Beldam's Origin|
| TheEmeraldArcher chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
OK, Im not an amazing writter myself but this was so bad it gave me cancer
| monkey girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
very weird, I like it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I like it. You should publish it as a short-story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I find the theory good but still wonder where the idea of the Lamia came from and the fact that she is 'snake like' as the other mother is referred to as a 'spider'.
| Writer's Freedom chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
It sounds like a logical theory, and it makes a lot of sense after reading the book. Nice read, I'm planning to rewrite be careful what you wish for in some time.
See you next Chapter!
| MysteriousWriting chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
im guessing this is going into the lamia story, well im gonna have to skip right past that part now...
| Alice-Anna.Berlin chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Wow this was way cool. I never thought about it like that, but it make sense.