I just loved your story so much. I wish there was a sequel follow up. The difficulty of Sev in his dorms, maybe, he starts sleeping in gryffindor now that one bed will be empty.

If you do write, I'll totally be reading it

This is amazing! I love it! Snape finally getting the friends he deserves!

fuck this is so goodness

Nice AU. I love the idea of Severus interacting with the Marauders in ways other than canon, as in less hostility. I like that you pointed out the similarities between Remus and Severus and then, to some extent, Sirius and Severus. Thanks for sharing.

I was reading this despite nagging misgivings but was astonished - and appalled - here at your description of Snape's reflections about joining the Death Eaters, contrasting the DEs' activities with Gryffindor virtue. The same "virtue" whereby the Marotters (name from Alethea27) have already tortured Snape for four everlasting years and fully intended to keep right on doing so until your OOC Lupin decided not to remain an arrant moral coward? That virtue?

Different perspective? The same outrageously hypocritical Marotters have the almighty bleeding gall to call the DEs cruel!

The one legitimate reflection was Snape's recognition that the DEs' behavior was no different from that of Tobias. Too bad he forgot that nor was that of the Potter gang.

I should daresay that THIS IS AMAZING!

Awesome story... Hoping there is a sequel...:D

This was amazing! I love it sm! I love Remus and how sweet he is! And this is such an interesting and creative AU that I LOVED! Remus and Snape friendship was adorable AND YES THEY STOPPED PETERS BETRAYAL! I can’t express how much I love this story! Im so happy I stumbled upon it!

Absolutely adored your story!

This is great! You have managed to make them friends and all four are likable while still being in character! Outstanding!

For once, Severus, Remus, James and Sirius follow their natural character: to become real friends from Hogwarts!
Your story is great, because you make this scenario seem really natural, with their well respected characters. Even Peter is perfect: he's not a caricature, and his betrayal is superbly explained.
To find a defect (it's still difficult ...), I would complain that Lily has no role: with her character, she would have had her good place in marauding! But I understand that it would have complicated the story ...
Thank you for sharing your imagination with us!

SNI VELL US
not SNIVILIS
not SNIVELLIUS
AND DEFINITELY NOT SNIVELLOUS

Very unusual plot! I really like it. Severus is so cute when he's pretending he doesn't like them. Also, I like how you used Snape's owl form as an excuse to pretend to be a mail owl; it really helps the plot, So yeah, keep up the good work. And congrats on your book, as well!

This story is SO good

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