I loved it! I ship them so hard! Could you make a sequel where they have a kid? (Kid... *snicker*) Sorry, couldn't not point that out. X)

It was a cute story one of my new favorites

Awesome I loved it

LOVE IT !

that was good. i like it.

This is messed up! But I love it though!
Maka: Really? I kinda find it more romancy.
Soul:Yeah and I have a great girl with me!*whispers to me I love Maka*
Me:No kidding I already know that.

very nice [:

it seemed kinda, i dunno, rushed in a way? Like, i expected the inter-action between Maka and Soul, like how they fell in love, to not be as instantaneous as you made it out to be

however, it was very good and kawaii

thanks for writing it [:

Loved it good ending

Awww~ It was so cute!

AWWWW thats sooo cute

funny end. Yes it was fluffy. Just a little bit. A little more meat to the plot would be nice. That's really the only problem. The rest was good.

Parent contrast. I would have liked to see more of that. It was poigant.

Now this felt rushed. Description but the relationship is far too rushed. 'new found love'. it was good until that point. Just too fasat

The last part has been my favorite so far. It ahd the most meat on it. The other parts haqve too much dialogue and not enough description. The last part was a great balance

Thanks for this chapter and deleting the others, I was really confused, but this makes much more sense.