Reviews for A Soul Eater Fairytale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOO. Stupid demon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! EVEN IF IM NOT A DEFAULT SOMA SUPPORTER, THIS CHAPTER TOTALLY ROCKED! I LUVED IT! I LUVLUV THIS STORY! CANT WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER :D |
![]() ![]() plzzzzzzzzzzzz update its just getting to the romance plzzzzzzzzzz |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAWWW. SOULLL! I just want to hug him x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, poor lonely Soul! YOU STUPID DEMON!(Talking about the little red imp) LEAVE SOUL ALONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS. STORY. IS. ADDICTING. PERIOD. . (see the period :3) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm dying to know what happens ! Keep goin love the story! |
![]() ![]() Interesting concept :) Please continue soon. The story is quite enchanting! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD TYPE MORE I WANT MORE I CANT WAIT HURRY! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please go on!~3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool intro 4 kid cnt wait 4 the next update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're getting better! I was worried at first, when I read the first chapter but this chapter is such a huge improvement! One thing though, when someone is talking in speeches and you use a speech vocabulary (example: muttered, asked, said, growled, snarled, whispered, murmured etcetc) after it should be a comma. eg: Instead of "Hi." Amy greeted. It should be "Hi," Amy greeted. |
![]() ![]() That was really awsome! Hope you update soon! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow a sence of adventure in Makas part makes me happy _ I hope u update soon because i really wanna now wat kind of soul purification method maka and soul will pull off together... Plz &Nd thnk uz! |
![]() ![]() very good |