Reviews for Avatar The Last Dragon Ball Z Kai
Delanie chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
i'm very sorry, but this is the worst story ever
MontagJ chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
There’s even less here. There’s no reason why this shouldn’t be in the previous chapter. It would still be too short, but at least then it would have had some kind of conclusion. And don’t break the fourth wall, Dragonball & Dragonball Z deserve more respect than that.
MontagJ chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
This is very confused and hard to read. It’s filled to the brim with errors, and you can’t have two people speaking in the same paragraph. It’s far too short and ends arbitrarily, with no separation from the authors note. You don’t describe anything, not the people or the setting, and I don’t even know if Zamats is a boy or a girl. How old is Zamats? What does he or she look like (other than the tail, just having a Saiyan doesn’t mean it’s a Dragonball story). This was hard to get through and the only reason I did was because of how short it is. There’s just nothing here to critique, sorry.