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Ok naru/hana seem to be updated once per year good story hopefully your muse can kick it into high gear for you

You've made quite big mistakes without realizing, at the start of chapter 1 you've mentioned "his blue eyes met her amber eyes" but then later you've mentioned that he got sharingans from Sasuke.. Guess people dont pay much attention.. Secondly if he has the sharingans from itachi or even sasuke who had EMS he shouldnt be prone to genjutsu.. It doesnt add up.. I like the concept but you need to make some adjustments..

Wow, this is amazing. I hope you will continue working on this masterfully written piece of art. I find myself at a loss for more words to describe this, so with that, I hope to see you next chapter.

i live this history please continue

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I forgot to mention this in my last review. I love the pairing, my personal favorite. I also loved the story that inspired this pairing for you, it was FANTASTIC, wasn't it?

Loving the premise and story so far! My only question/problem is why did seeing Konan's death activate his rinnegan? If that were the case then why didn't all the other moments of great loss that Naruto experienced in cannon activate his rinnegan. ie why didn't Jiraiya's death, sasuke's "death" during the wave arc activate the rinnegan?

Awesome story so far, but one thing I caught in this chapter, previously you had stated that Hanabi was a Chuunin, and Naruto was her Jounin instructor in order for her to get ready for her to step up and become a Jounin as well, but in this chapter she was a Genin? That was the only goof that I saw, but I like where this story is going, honestly, there aren't enough Naruto/Hanabi fics out there, I would like to see this one become one of the best. Good luck and I'll see you next update.

I like the story's plot line. Glad to see a good naruhaba finally being written.

I think the story is a little choppy though. I would suggest that you add more details, especially around naru and hahabi's interactions and thoughts. It will make it easier to read.

But good job so far, hope you update soon.

Great story, really enjoyed it thus far.

This would be MUCH better if 40% of it wasn't notes and such... Otherwise seems promising.

I started reading on 2011 and just found this fic I loved the fic that gave you inspiration for it as well please update again soon and thank you for your service to our great nation