Reviews for Here And Now
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
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Aquarius Seth chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Ah this was excellent work. Thank you for sharing.
Tawny The Disturbed chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Mary Lou chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I want to thank you for writing a slash piece that does not merely try to reenact the sexual act. We all know how that works. What you do is emphasize the emotional roller coaster that House and Wilson are on as they begin this new phase of their relationship. You wrote their first time together realistically and gutsy, not the sugar coated version where their sex was perfect and they climax together. You made it real. Bravo!
Maura A.K.A The Dark One chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Your story is great! But at times I couldn't tell whos P.O.V. it was. Maybe next time put a little heading or some astericks (*) to let people know when one character's P.O.V. is over. And the dialogue was good too, but sometimes I couldn't tell who was talkng because there as no quotation marks. Besids those things your story was perfect. Keep up the good work! :)
lcdrsuperseal chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Cute :)
ax10gas chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
loved the intensity of the last few lines.
paulac45 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Nice story - good concept. On the 'technical' side, pity no consistent speech marks or defined paragraphs etc to show where one character's thoughts ended and the other's started.