|Reviews for The First Time is always a Surprise|
| Alicia chapter 1 . 2/9
I loved this flick. You showed us just how much he really plays a fool when in fact he does have come sense! great story you should write more. Trust me I'm a writer of my own creation and fan fics. You have one hell of a skill.
| o.O chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
WELL THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY XD
| Twishadowhunter chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Very erotic and romantic! Loved it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Note to you:
there is no 'u' in 'once'
| cure sugar chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
love it so sexy
| Creativity at its best chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
| Cassi0chan chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
That was so awesome! *.*
| Demonic Wolf Queen chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Next story lucy becomes pregnant I hope. Great Story!
| wakamehime530 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
| Ryuketsu no hana chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
me encanto :3
| diegofu chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
is not a bad srorye but it rush a litle
| Fedski chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
| Unending Enigma chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
And then... LUCY'S PREGNANT!
Dun DUN DUUUUNNN!
| Ace's Shadow Girl chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
a-hahaha, I thought it was a dream the whole time xD (would have been a good ending)
quite hot, though.