Reviews for Soft and Pretty
ToKeepFromGoingUnder chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Oh my goodness. Oh my fucking goodness. You seriously need to contour this story or I just might cry. A d you don't want your reader crying do you? I LOVED it so much!
Joemama chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
OH SHIT

THAT LAST LINE

I gasped irl hahaha

This is so fucking good! Continue!
KelterSkelter chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I do love me some angry Callian. Please continue!
BringMeGiants chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Aarrghh! You can't stop there! MORE!
mcdermie11 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
i cant believe ive missed this story. :O

i love the angry banter between these two. its really true to their characters.

i would have loved to see this story continued.

- if you ever have spare time and need something to do. please, continue this story, im loving where it could end up!-

Thanks for posting.

-molly
Lil.Miss.JoJo.33 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Are you planning to do anymore to this? I think it could be epic!
WillySpooky chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Great story . I hope we will get more. It is a great start and now I want to have the answer of the question.
thamy chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
please, for god's sake,continue this story!
anacat chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
can we have some more please? Great so far
lrigD chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Oh God, this was so good. Very intense. Very hot! Please continue.
LolaRedMuse chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
"He was a man who needed control—and he had a hard time dealing with others trying to usurp his control and an even harder time with people trying to control him. Which is all anyone had been trying to do lately, it seemed."

OMG! i just realized that im Cal Fucking Lightman!

And as to the argument, just 1 word: HOT!

pls DO go ahead n as soon as possible, may i add. thanks so much!
anonamous chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
wow brilliantly written. I was not expecting that. Keep it coming please. can feel the bloody tension. love it!
martini chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I love that they are so real with eachother...loved it, bloody hot!
FritzKebab chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Ahhh. I'd forgotten how much I like Angry!Cal and Angry!Gillian. This is some good stuff. I can totally see them having an argument just like this. Love it! (Do I even need to say I want more?)
Heatherlynne chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Can't wait to see where you take this story. Love it so far. Dark Cal is a fun Cal to read.
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