|Reviews for Beyond Basic Knowledge|
| Ouch Charlie chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
i kinda liked it...
I want you to write more about Liliana Black, k?
| opaque-girl chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Good work - I liked it. The use of the prompt was also good D
| Dream of Many Dreams chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
I feel like I'm missing alot. The story moves too quickly to really string it all together. I get that Liliana is a Black not a Lupin and that she is in Wood's year, so that would make Sirius...17 when she was born and if her older brother is two years older that makes him 15. Not to mention that I don't think Sirius would ever date a Snape. I don't know.
I think it really needs more back story. If your working it at the original timeline then Sirius was a teen dad. Also, since when did Snape have a sister, is she older than him, younger, his twin? This leaves too many questions to that don't get answered when a year flies by in a little over 1000 words.
| Rising From The Flames chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
I liked it. It made some big leaps in time that were a little confusing though. :)