Reviews for There Fell a Stillness
Pattigirl23 chapter 19 . 7/6/2023
I loved this story so much! Thank you for sharing
ExBficLover chapter 1 . 10/21/2022
Wow! Simply Wow! Your writing, your intelligence, your characters, your story just blew my mind. I know I am going to read this many many more times to come. Hope you get to publish this someday if you haven’t already. And hope you are still writing somewhere out there. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
bunnysue chapter 19 . 11/2/2021
You have talent! I kind of like where this ended even though there is much more to tell as the 2 characters deserve growth and happiness. Your characters have so much depth. Why can't Charlie realize that Bella got left worse then he did. I don't think I will be able to get your Bella and Edward off my mind for a while.
PS. You had some really crazy "karens" in the comments and I hope you did not let them get to you.
Thanks for letting us read your story.
was-sticks chapter 18 . 7/2/2020
i was so close to finishing this bec i thought it’s something new and unproblematic in a way that no twific has ever been before. and that made me happy until this chapter. like seriously? you’re going to bring up confederacy? just like that? out of nowhere in this heavyhearted, slow burn ExB drama? you couldve left that out and still give us impact. i’m not even overreacting like what is it with the twifandom and being so obsessed with confederacy to the point that they can easily change that in FANFICTION where they can right smeyer’s flaws in the universe like they do with every other fucking AU but choose to KEEP confederacy in? anyway nice fic i guess that just bothered me because i was so invested but you had to add that in.
was-sticks chapter 2 . 7/1/2020
“indian name” ... yikes and for a fic updated in 2015 too
Guest chapter 17 . 8/30/2019
Do you mean "breathes" or "breaths"? You breathe when you take a breath. Just asking.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2019
"I took a peak in the mirror..." Again, it's PEEK, not PEAK.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
"...pealed at least four layers of esophageal lining away" Egad. It's PEELED.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
"I peaked at Rosalie and Emmett..." It's PEEKED, not PEAKED. To PEEK means "to sneak a look;" a PEAK is the topmost part of something - like a mountaintop.
Jonesn chapter 5 . 1/8/2019
I am just loving this. And I very much hope she breaks her abstinence.
shehazi chapter 19 . 8/25/2018
Thank you
chasinge chapter 19 . 4/2/2018
Thank you! I hope your writing again somewhere. :)
chasinge chapter 12 . 4/1/2018
Wow - your writing is poetry.
chasinge chapter 9 . 3/31/2018
Oh, this is so good. I love them.
Patriciadiane chapter 19 . 9/18/2017
Thank you
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