Reviews for Red and Black
Tirnel chapter 1 . 1/28
Not only the best fanfiction I've read but the best story I've read in ages! Nearly had me in tears on the demon island. As I usually don't cry reading stories, getting to that point was an accomplishment.
Ryuka32 chapter 28 . 11/14/2014
Love reading this over and over and over again. Never was one to review anything I read all that much but I do love to encourage the authors of the fanfics that take up our otherwise pointless leisure time. Has me emotional every time I read it.

Name: Ryuka
Status: Ongoing Manga, Anime, and Fanfiction Lover
Background Profession: Fanfic reader since 1998.
GrellSutcliff's chapter 15 . 4/5/2014
The dialogue is hard to understand because you say he for Sebastian but you also say he for Grell. I was really confused when you said at some point. "He grabbed his wrist" I thought Grell grabbed his own wrist but he grabbed Sebastian wrist
Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Don't use Japanese honorifics in an English story. It's annoying and destroys the atmosphere.
Guest chapter 28 . 3/16/2014
I don't even have words to describe how much I adored this story. The fluff, the romance, the drama, and the bit of angst (chapters 15-17, God I bawled my eyes out at those parts) had been a hell of a very satisfying roller coaster ride. I'm a bit bummed with Grell never regaining his voice but at least they still ended up together (and alive, or existent 'cause technically they're not really alive) and lived a hopefully happy life (or death, whatever). So hats off to you. This was definitely a job exceptionally done!
MapleTreeway chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
*Giggles* Well isn't Grell a tease?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Please tell me you watched the kuroshitsuji musical! I love red or black x3
Baby dops chapter 28 . 7/12/2013
Oh my GOODNESS this was wonderful, just a lovely emotional ride! I loved the imagery and depth you have the characters. I think this is my new favorite grellxsebby fics now! It's really quite beautiful it's almost like the black butler romeo and juliet! Keep writing!
Zelex656 chapter 18 . 5/1/2013
I read this story so fast each word and chapter made me want to read on more and more. It was wonderful thank you so much for letting me have the pleasure and joy of reading such a lovely story 3

Zelex
YouTalk2Much Halo chapter 28 . 4/3/2013
Im so amazed by how the story turned out! I totally love the alternate ending better, it fits perfectly! Your story is awesome!
ClockworkCoeur chapter 23 . 8/11/2011
Aaaaah... I'm crying again .'''

But this time because of Will...

Omg this fanfiction is so good!

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ClockworkCoeur chapter 20 . 8/11/2011
ACK! NUUUUU!

Stupid Will! I really didn't like him anyway, but - even though this is a fanfiction - I hate him now! T.T Grrr!

I remember learning about those things being good against watches years ago! XD Before I even knew what Kuroshitsuji was! Figures that they'd work against demons as well! -

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ClockworkCoeur chapter 17 . 8/11/2011
"I suppose I just hate looking at everything I never did and...never will have."

That line just reduced me to tears... Blimey I've never considered Grell's possible past before, but now that I do it's so sad, and I feel so sorry for him!

You're writing is so wonderful! 3333

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ClockworkCoeur chapter 8 . 8/11/2011
Omg! I really have no idea how to express my love for this fanfiction with words!

I've never read SebaGrell before, as I normally go for SebaCiel, but I've been in the mood for something different as of late... And I'm so glad that I found this fanfiction!

GAAAAH!

And now I've had to officially label myself as a terrible host, because one of my friends stayed over last night, and all I did this morning was hold up a pathetically week conversation with her whilst trying to read this .''''

Lol!

I can't wait to read MOOOOOAAAAR!

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BlueStarlightWarmDusk chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Now let me say that the first two chapters were confusing. The 'hismain' point of view makes it hard to decipher when you're talking about Grell, Sebby, or Ciel (not so much Ciel, because you refer to him as "the brat". I'm also a little disoriented with my surroundings from time to time.

But instead of forming a cloud above your head with constructive criticism, let's go to the rainbow in this situation, if you get what I'm saying.

Overall grammar is excellent, better than most I've read. Your descriptions have improved in this chapter, and things aren't as tough to decipher. Again, this is just my opinion. It won't be the same for everyone.
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