I keep checking your fics to see if they have been updated but unfortunately nothing so far. I hope these fics are not being abandoned, it would a real shame, your storylines are excellant and your writing is so descriptive that it leaves me craving more. I really do hope you update soon.

I just found your fic and love it. Please update soon!

I really love this story. Thank you so much for writing. please continue.

That does sound like the kind of thing Lisbon would say about her father... I remember rewatching one of the early episodes where she said "he was a good man" and thinking, 'hello? he put your brother in HOSPITAL once!' So, yeah, very Lisbon. This story is *sad* but really good as well.

I just love your stories! The only thing I was going to say was about the names of his wife and daughter, but you already cleared that up :). Thanks for writing these!

Wow. I'm speechless. This is so beautfully written.

You write amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow this is such a brilliant story, I can't wait to read more of it. You're covering such a sensitive topic so well and the relationship between Jane and Lisbon is really touching. I like the flashbacks to Jane's past as well and am rally looking forward to the story developing further. Brilliant job! xxx

Interesting chapter. I like the logic of Jane liking his edge-free round teacups because they are not a potential self-harming implement. But having OCD myself and met many fellow suffers, Jane doesn't strike mr as the OCD type, but thats just my opinion. I see the intricacies of his tea-making ritual more a reflection of his fussiness and a shout-out to Sherlock Holmes. Beautifully concise writing.

That was an amazing chapter. I had to breathe deep when it was over and try to relax my stomach muscles after her partial description of what happened. I'm glad she's started talking, but I know it's just the start. One step forward and two (or three) steps back. Your descriptions of their gestures and expressions and body language are great, too. Really helps me visualize. Thanks for updating.

Your empathy and understanding of the subtle nuances of emotional and physical trauma is refreshing. Either you have experienced this or have helped people through crises. My guess is you are unwittingly helping many who read this to better understand their own responses to similar situations. Bravo! Keep writing.

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How good is this chapter! Its heartbreaking when Lisbon reveals to Jane that she kept thinking "Jane's coming" while she was being attacked, while he thought she had just turned off her phone because she had realised how late it was.

At least she's begining to talk about it, can't wait to read the next installment.

loved Jane's interaction with his wife. often she is written not as a likeable character

amazing writing.

This chapter was so sad. I cried for Lisbon. Poor Woman. :-( It's so hard breaking to hear what she went through and that she finaly gave up. And that Jane feels this rage and guilt... So glad he is there for her and won't let her alone. I love the details you put into the story. It only makes it more real. Although sad, it is really good.