|Reviews for Redress|
| LittleMender chapter 5 . 11/26/2010
Again, painful to read but so well written. I've long thought Lisbon to be an intriguing character. Everything Jane knows about her past has come from outside sources or inadvertent eavesdropping. He's told her some of his secrets, but she's never talked to him outright about any of hers.
I know it will take her a while to heal, but I hope you let him come up with a better way to talk to/help her soon. It's hard to watch him flounder.
Please keep updating!
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
Really poignant mix of Jane's past with his current concerns. Gripping read.
| fenix chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
Really well written, I'm really curious as to where you're taking this - keep up the good work!
| Jisbon4ever chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
Great chapter. It had it all; the present the past and everything combined. I really enjoy an awkward Jane and his eagerness to help Lisbon. I just want to hug them both. Can't wait for more...
| ingz chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
Like the story.
Just felt the need to say one thing.
Either you've done some serious research or you really know what you're talking about.
| LittleMender chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
Again, excellent writing. I like seeing Jane pulled out of himself-caring about someone else. Also liked the glimpse of Jane with his family. And the glimpse of Jane on the 'feminine products' aisle as well. Please keep updating!
| Marian Jones chapter 3 . 11/22/2010
good. a bit dark for my liking, but allover a great story. in character.
| xanderseye chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Good storyline, very graphic emotionally. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Having just watched the episode you are referring to I believe Jane's wife is called Angela, thats the name that Jane's carnie friends use when talking about his brother-in-law.
| 24Mentalistlover chapter 3 . 10/17/2010
Please update soon! I love this :)
| Anna chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
Love it! Please update soon!
| Aqua Mage chapter 3 . 10/7/2010
Nice chapter; I loved Van Pelt's role in particular. And Charlotte is Jane's daughter, I think, because Angela was his wife.
| Jisbon4ever chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Great chapter and poor Lisbon. I feel bad for her condition.
P.S. I know. Some people are saying Angela is the wife. I don't know how they know that because i only saw the names, but nothing else. anyways, good luck!
| cherryblossomcanopy chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
wow, best story i've read in ages. you have me hooked, can't wait for more :)
| LittleMender chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
This is difficult to read-a sure sign you've written it very well, considering the subject matter. You've kept them in character very well, too. I like Grace in this chapter-upbeat with something old and dark buried deep-very like her in the show. I also like that this explores their friendship more fully. Their relationship is very complex-more than simple colleagues or simple friends. I don't think either character does simple, except for denial and avoidance. I hope you can update often. I look forward to seeing where you take them.
| Anna chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
Really great! Love the flashbacks/memories from Jane!