|Reviews for Ever wonder what if?|
| Pinkaboos chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Hmm...I like the way it starts out, but I was wondering, if Miri was in love with Peder (like Shannon Hale explicitly said in the book) do you think she would move on that quickly. Just a thought.
| Senevilla chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I wish there was more to read! I've always wondered what it would be like if Miri was chosen instead! Please, please, PLEASE add to it!
| Candy Von Schweetz chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
i think you should write an ending where britta was never connected to princes steffan and he chooses miri but then they have a more exciting adventure in danland. it would be cooler than reading about being shunned in cold academy for a year.
| Twinkie-in-a-Ding-Dong-World chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Okay I'm not goin to flame. The story was good. I'm just gonna say if the book DID end like this, I would throw it in the fireplace!
| XxAriadnexX chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Love the story. I'm sure this is how it would've happened in the book. You should write about what happens when she goes to the castle with Steffan.
| sunshine loving devil chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
well...it was really good, different. i love that. write more of these miri/steffan pairings. I would love to read more.
| InkWoven chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
That was refreshing. I think this is exactly how it would play out if Stephen actually had picked Miri. Well done!
| StrangeoneXD chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
this is quite the interesting concept, care to continue? i have always wondered how it would be with the prince and miri
| Heartflower chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
i would rly like it if peder tries to fight for her! O_o also i like Peder better than the prince!
| tofuskin21 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
that was sad... i'm really curious to see who's gonna fall in love with who. it was pretty cute-sad, but i think the writing was kinda choppy.
| Adeline Rosa chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
your writting is good! I like this idea very much.
| VivaciousPinnacleGlom chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
C'mon plz cont with Peder's and the other people's reactions. An if Peder will fight to get Miri back. Plz?
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
i really like this story
you should keep it going