|Reviews for Red Leaves, Cool Air, Chapped Lips|
| Kim chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Nicely done, nicely done indeed! I love this pairing. I love HoneySyn in general actually... Hm, trying to think of any criticism. I thought your pronouns were a little odd in places - "the shorter boy" notably. Maybe you were going for more variation, but I don't think it was really necessary. Anyway, I loved your style, it fit with the original story really well! Write more? ;D
| PopcornObsessed-DragonLuver chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Great story, I really like your writing style (cue raid of your fics), also I now want to be able to see a graveyard during "fall" (I say it like that because where I'm from leaves don't usually fall during Autumn, since most trees are evergreens).
| Fluffness chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Awwwww... It was so sweet! Love 'em fluffies! The description was awesome too! Nice work!
| not one for history chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I really did wish the fandom was a larger one. I keep coming back to it when I'm feeling nostalgic. :P
This was a lovely little gem of a fic. Thank you for writing it!
| Fizz Frenchtoast chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
adorable and dorky :D
| FlyteToFreedom chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Sweet and fluffy to the point where we can start making cotton candy! XD
Ha ha, anyways... awesome J/M fic! I really loved the fall setting and the cemetery-ness. I always wanted to try doing that but...
Yay, for fanfics! I can just imagine Josh and Metis walking through graveyards making lame jokes and disturbing the dead instead! So great job! :D
~~ 5 hearts!
| nabraska chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Wow, this was beautiful!
I could picture this all happening in my head, SOCUTE3
you've really pinned down metis as someone loving fall here, really well done, and i loved how you wrote josh as well
all those cute little things mentioned in passing i found adorable - like josh having the urges to kiss metis in innapropriate places like in class and at the dining table with his parents there, i laughed out loud
An adorable story, really well done!
| OctoberFirst chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Very sweet and cute. Well written too.
I thought the cemetery was weird at first but you definately made it work. Awesome job. 3
Not enough Metis/Josh love out there.