Reviews for The Hybrid experiment
NYSTLSportsFan chapter 9 . 8/27/2014
Wow, seeing this story brings back memories for me. This was actually one of the first stories I read on this site, back before I had an account, and it was certainly one of the first really good ones I read. It's such a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long; there was so much potential for the story. If you see this, I really do hope you continue it.

Sincerely,

NYSTLSportsFan
Ryan chapter 5 . 9/17/2013
make it 28 reviews
NYSTLSportsFan chapter 10 . 8/18/2013
An update would be nice.
galladelucarioman chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
UPDATE! This is one of my favorite stories, as I love Gallades, Lucarios, and cars. Update!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
Dish ish sho awshum
anonymous person chapter 10 . 9/14/2012
i was looking at xxcandies reveiw saying it would be fun to be a hybridit is fun im not gona say which one I am but yeh its fun especially when your about to be exposed what a rush it is also right now im learning to use phsycic and its fun i know that there used to be only 7 inculeds me but now theres 10 but i wont say who or what
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
poop
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
a mistake in the first sentence not good
jachd28 chapter 9 . 2/13/2011
short but okay
KitsPokePeople chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Okay, just looking at your first chapter I can see somethings wrong.

When a new person is talking it is a new paragraph. Without that, the dialogue looks sloppy and squished together.
scripps2000 chapter 10 . 12/10/2010
Great story with some cool characters (though you could develop them a bit more). Being a hybrid sounds kinda cool! :p
jachd28 chapter 8 . 10/25/2010
awsome
jachd28 chapter 7 . 10/25/2010
nice please start a new paragraph when a different person talks though
z man chapter 6 . 10/20/2010
nice
z man chapter 5 . 10/20/2010
train nice! but you realy got to work on paragraphs
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