Reviews for Demon King's Descendant
Arsenal chapter 1 . 7/26
Flawed story. It would have been better if no one knew of raisen's existence except Naruto. Shinobi work in darkness and deceit.
carol chapter 9 . 7/9
love this one are you going to update anymore
Monster King chapter 9 . 6/23
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon I hope that you have not giving up on it.
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 8 . 6/19
Update
robert krause chapter 2 . 3/27
when Naruto get the moeny back to him now and when living in his new home Naruto had running bounyhuther co into most good co and when it was running Naruto and co had the mob moeny be away for when buit up sife homes in the whipool west couny and bad lands for when Naruto had living in them and when others had not see it and when took out the sound vaillge old base lub out and when in them he find notes no danzo and some working capmes and when bund one down he find men had sex with woamn and grils age 19 to 29 and when he doing to men made it look ing like a war was no too .
Guest chapter 9 . 3/6
Update soon please
Spider-Man999 chapter 9 . 3/1
Hope you'll update this one soon!
Guest chapter 9 . 2/12
Sush a shame that this story seems dead
Guest chapter 9 . 1/31
"my spy network has protected konoha for years".. Except that a new village was formed that hated konoha as much as iwa, two ARMIES and a jinchuriki snuck in, a PRIVATE army not under control of the hokage was formed in the SAME VILLAGE! An amabassador was allowed to kidnap the heiress of a (then) respected clan and you had two BIG TIME traitors (one working as a TEACHER for all the clan heads, the other as a top MEDIC) were feeding all information out! Oh yeah, GREAT JOB at "protecting the village" *rolls eyes* about as much protection as a screen door is from a chainsaw! Heck even in cannon that "network" isn't of much use! is the toad, forgetting that the Shinigami is going to DEVOUR HIS SOUL upon his death?... NO HEAVEN or the spirit realm is waiting on him, he was told that back quite a few chapters ago, and NOTHING has changed. He doesn't NEED to worry about minato or kushina, he's GOING TO HELL! (BROKE THE CONTRACT, remember?) How COULD the toad do a reverse summoning? He's MISSING AN ARM remember? You NEED two arms to do that jutsu!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31
"something they were going to rectify soon".. WHY NOT NOW?! How is putting ALL these problems IN THE VILLAGE on the back burner, to put out fires so far away that it's laughable a GOOD IDEA?.. See I was right, they let everyone get away with everything till Hinata and Hana got hurt, THEN he flew off the handle, so tell me, how does WAITING AROUND help anyone? Or do ANYTHING other then create MORE AND MORE problems? Also NOBODY is going to call out jiraiya on that whole "working with danzo" thing? Despite he was a traitor and killed ON ORDERS from the hokage! (a blood-thief, a conspirator and a disgusting monster.. Maybe HE taught orochimaru.. "Birds of a feather" and all that. And again with that ridicules "spy network" excuse. 00-ZERO rofl. "an insult to your father"?.. Um don't you remember that ALL this STARTED because OF the agreement with the Shinigami that MINATO made? How would ANY of what Naruto has become be an insult?.. It WAS MINATO'S IDEA! Because he DIDN'T TRUST THE VILLAGE OR HIS SENSEI! (rightly so)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30
One SMALL problem with danzo's other MORON idea, Naruto EVEN in canon can drawl out and PERMANENTLY REMOVE kyuubi's chakra FROM anyone (he took it ALL back from sora PERMANENTLY), so once AGAIN, dumb idea, doomed to failure from the second it was born (maybe danzo should have ordered some "acme demon strips" or something?)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30
You know with the raikage NOW being beaten too, it's getting a little ridiciuless, I mean Naruto ALREADY killed the third hokage and the 1st Otokage and now has beaten the Raikage, I'd be thinking people would be getting SICK of fighting him, just for him to PROVE to them (and the entire village their in) that he's STRONGER! Given ALL their overwhelming egos, I would think they'd just be getting SICK of him "suggesting" a fight and just make him go "cold turkey", NO MORE FIGHTING.. Then sit back and watch him "self-destruct". After all he seems to like fighting, just a bit "too much", like a drug that he keeps needing a fix of, Hilariously, they want to beat him?.. Simple, DECLARE peace! He'll die of WITHDRAWL within a year.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/30
See? The previous chapter kinda PROVED my point, Naruto had NO TROUBLE in KILLING doto, but against the leaf? (whom have abused him and broken a contract with the Shinigami?) He only "hurts" them. He's already got the "COLLAR" around his neck like a good little doggie.

Also it IS a complete "contradiction", NOBODY CARES if NOBODY IS LISTENING, it wasn't naruto's recommendation that got tsunade the hat, it's the fact that Danzo IS TOO OLD TO HAVE IT NOW! All doing his "plan" does is the EXACT OPPOSITE of his character. HE TOOK TOO LONG! He could try to "discredit" the namikaze and the hokage all he wants, NOBODY is paying attention to him, all it would do is sound like is the bitter ramblings of a senile, old fool! PROVING the point even more! PLUS committing TREASON! His entire plan sounds STUPID enough to be thought up by "Willy Coyote" in the old bugs bunny cartoons!

Finally he killed someone from the leaf, but only when given the "okay"... His threats are HOLLOW
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
PUT ON TRAIL? By WHOM? there are NO COURTS in this world! They did the world a favor and KILLED ALL THE LAWYERS long ago! (It seems to be the ONE thing they got right)."lets take that bitch down".. They DO know that she's the kyuubi right?.. FLATTENED ALL OF KONOHA, EVERY SINGLE SHINOBI doing their BEST jutsus and it didn't even SLOW HER DOWN? ALL OF THEM COMBINED wasn't enough to even halt her advance?... Makes me scratch my head. Your power levels on these people seem to be a little, CONFUSING, considering ALL of the village (every single shinobi, tried to fight kyuubi before, COMBINED) and FAILED, they needed a GOD to step in, that they broke contract with... Um they ALL should be collectively KISSING NARUTO'S ASS IN THE BROWN! Otherwise their ALL not ONLY gonna die, BUT THEY'RE ALL GOING TO HELL. (no second life, no heaven, just MISERY).. Instead of like most people, they don't wonder, they KNOW IT FOR A FACT! You'd think that would make them a BIT more hesitant in WANTING to anger him.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
Well that's kinda the case in what roga said.. except about money, I always thought it was funny, that super-powered people would care about that at ALL... I mean use an earth jutsu and create GOLD... Heck bring up jewels.. Go kill a noble and take him for everything he's worth, even the gato thing, what if zabuzza didn't CARE about his contract, just beheaded the man and took ALL his wealth? Put a genjutsu on some rocks to turn them into diamonds.. See? Money is kind of pathetically EASY if you have super powers and a questionable morality. POWER? NOW there is something that can't be faked.. Not political power, TRUE POWER! The problem with that (unless like Naruto, YOUR THE HEAD POWER) is you always have to be careful NOT to step on the toes of people with GREATER POWER then you.. If your the HEAD POWER? Well that's a completely different story, then do whatever you want, whenever you want to WHOMEVER YOU WANT, because the world is REALLY AND TRULY yours.
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