Reviews for Demon King's Descendant
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 8 . 6/19
robert krause chapter 2 . 3/27
when Naruto get the moeny back to him now and when living in his new home Naruto had running bounyhuther co into most good co and when it was running Naruto and co had the mob moeny be away for when buit up sife homes in the whipool west couny and bad lands for when Naruto had living in them and when others had not see it and when took out the sound vaillge old base lub out and when in them he find notes no danzo and some working capmes and when bund one down he find men had sex with woamn and grils age 19 to 29 and when he doing to men made it look ing like a war was no too .
Guest chapter 9 . 3/6
Update soon please
Spider-Man999 chapter 9 . 3/1
Hope you'll update this one soon!
Guest chapter 9 . 2/12
Sush a shame that this story seems dead
Guest chapter 9 . 1/31
"my spy network has protected konoha for years".. Except that a new village was formed that hated konoha as much as iwa, two ARMIES and a jinchuriki snuck in, a PRIVATE army not under control of the hokage was formed in the SAME VILLAGE! An amabassador was allowed to kidnap the heiress of a (then) respected clan and you had two BIG TIME traitors (one working as a TEACHER for all the clan heads, the other as a top MEDIC) were feeding all information out! Oh yeah, GREAT JOB at "protecting the village" *rolls eyes* about as much protection as a screen door is from a chainsaw! Heck even in cannon that "network" isn't of much use! is the toad, forgetting that the Shinigami is going to DEVOUR HIS SOUL upon his death?... NO HEAVEN or the spirit realm is waiting on him, he was told that back quite a few chapters ago, and NOTHING has changed. He doesn't NEED to worry about minato or kushina, he's GOING TO HELL! (BROKE THE CONTRACT, remember?) How COULD the toad do a reverse summoning? He's MISSING AN ARM remember? You NEED two arms to do that jutsu!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31
"something they were going to rectify soon".. WHY NOT NOW?! How is putting ALL these problems IN THE VILLAGE on the back burner, to put out fires so far away that it's laughable a GOOD IDEA?.. See I was right, they let everyone get away with everything till Hinata and Hana got hurt, THEN he flew off the handle, so tell me, how does WAITING AROUND help anyone? Or do ANYTHING other then create MORE AND MORE problems? Also NOBODY is going to call out jiraiya on that whole "working with danzo" thing? Despite he was a traitor and killed ON ORDERS from the hokage! (a blood-thief, a conspirator and a disgusting monster.. Maybe HE taught orochimaru.. "Birds of a feather" and all that. And again with that ridicules "spy network" excuse. 00-ZERO rofl. "an insult to your father"?.. Um don't you remember that ALL this STARTED because OF the agreement with the Shinigami that MINATO made? How would ANY of what Naruto has become be an insult?.. It WAS MINATO'S IDEA! Because he DIDN'T TRUST THE VILLAGE OR HIS SENSEI! (rightly so)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30
One SMALL problem with danzo's other MORON idea, Naruto EVEN in canon can drawl out and PERMANENTLY REMOVE kyuubi's chakra FROM anyone (he took it ALL back from sora PERMANENTLY), so once AGAIN, dumb idea, doomed to failure from the second it was born (maybe danzo should have ordered some "acme demon strips" or something?)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30
You know with the raikage NOW being beaten too, it's getting a little ridiciuless, I mean Naruto ALREADY killed the third hokage and the 1st Otokage and now has beaten the Raikage, I'd be thinking people would be getting SICK of fighting him, just for him to PROVE to them (and the entire village their in) that he's STRONGER! Given ALL their overwhelming egos, I would think they'd just be getting SICK of him "suggesting" a fight and just make him go "cold turkey", NO MORE FIGHTING.. Then sit back and watch him "self-destruct". After all he seems to like fighting, just a bit "too much", like a drug that he keeps needing a fix of, Hilariously, they want to beat him?.. Simple, DECLARE peace! He'll die of WITHDRAWL within a year.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/30
See? The previous chapter kinda PROVED my point, Naruto had NO TROUBLE in KILLING doto, but against the leaf? (whom have abused him and broken a contract with the Shinigami?) He only "hurts" them. He's already got the "COLLAR" around his neck like a good little doggie.

Also it IS a complete "contradiction", NOBODY CARES if NOBODY IS LISTENING, it wasn't naruto's recommendation that got tsunade the hat, it's the fact that Danzo IS TOO OLD TO HAVE IT NOW! All doing his "plan" does is the EXACT OPPOSITE of his character. HE TOOK TOO LONG! He could try to "discredit" the namikaze and the hokage all he wants, NOBODY is paying attention to him, all it would do is sound like is the bitter ramblings of a senile, old fool! PROVING the point even more! PLUS committing TREASON! His entire plan sounds STUPID enough to be thought up by "Willy Coyote" in the old bugs bunny cartoons!

Finally he killed someone from the leaf, but only when given the "okay"... His threats are HOLLOW
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
PUT ON TRAIL? By WHOM? there are NO COURTS in this world! They did the world a favor and KILLED ALL THE LAWYERS long ago! (It seems to be the ONE thing they got right)."lets take that bitch down".. They DO know that she's the kyuubi right?.. FLATTENED ALL OF KONOHA, EVERY SINGLE SHINOBI doing their BEST jutsus and it didn't even SLOW HER DOWN? ALL OF THEM COMBINED wasn't enough to even halt her advance?... Makes me scratch my head. Your power levels on these people seem to be a little, CONFUSING, considering ALL of the village (every single shinobi, tried to fight kyuubi before, COMBINED) and FAILED, they needed a GOD to step in, that they broke contract with... Um they ALL should be collectively KISSING NARUTO'S ASS IN THE BROWN! Otherwise their ALL not ONLY gonna die, BUT THEY'RE ALL GOING TO HELL. (no second life, no heaven, just MISERY).. Instead of like most people, they don't wonder, they KNOW IT FOR A FACT! You'd think that would make them a BIT more hesitant in WANTING to anger him.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
Well that's kinda the case in what roga said.. except about money, I always thought it was funny, that super-powered people would care about that at ALL... I mean use an earth jutsu and create GOLD... Heck bring up jewels.. Go kill a noble and take him for everything he's worth, even the gato thing, what if zabuzza didn't CARE about his contract, just beheaded the man and took ALL his wealth? Put a genjutsu on some rocks to turn them into diamonds.. See? Money is kind of pathetically EASY if you have super powers and a questionable morality. POWER? NOW there is something that can't be faked.. Not political power, TRUE POWER! The problem with that (unless like Naruto, YOUR THE HEAD POWER) is you always have to be careful NOT to step on the toes of people with GREATER POWER then you.. If your the HEAD POWER? Well that's a completely different story, then do whatever you want, whenever you want to WHOMEVER YOU WANT, because the world is REALLY AND TRULY yours.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
"I'm putting those that wronged me in their place and most know not to piss me off"...etc..? Um no your not, and NO THEY DON'T! Well, they know, they just don't CARE if they piss you off! ROFL.. I don't see how he's done A SINGLE thing that helped himself in the LONG RUN.. Short term? Yeah, but all it's done is created MORE enemies(the hyuuga elders, hiashi), left the enemies he ALREADY had alive(the councils, the elders, Jiryia, sasuke, kakashi, Itachi, Kasami, the akutski, kabuto, the sound four), give them FURTHER incentive to get even and give himself more and more openings! They're NOT gonna stop until they ARE STOPPED! Either Permanently (dead) OR unable to continue (maimed, all funds taken away and disgraced).Like megadeth said: "peace sells, but who's buying?"

You want to make an interesting Naruto story, how about one where the ones against the boy, just VANISH.. Never to be seen again. Naruto is the one killing them of course.. Like the earlier mentioned people, but nobody SEES him do it, and there is NO evidence he does it and MOST OF ALL, no body of the victim or any trace, they are just in the last place seen, people follow the scent or chakra or whatever and then it's just GONE. Old cop saying: "no body? No crime". Even better, some time AFTER they vanish, their bank accounts suddenly are EMPTIED from somewhere far off... Hot springs, or wave, or sea country... ROFL.. it would drive Konoha absolutely BONKERS, Especially if those places were NOT POSSIBLE with the amount of time in-between their disappearance and the drain. With the gossip mill of konoha around, they'd be TERRIFIED.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
Why does everyone get so SCARED? I mean don't they KNOW by now that Naruto AND tsunade ARE ALL TALK? They talk a big game, and they release some K.I. but really they NEVER DO anything! So why be frightened of them? So what if they clobber some people every once in a while, tsunade NOR Naruto never do it to the elders or to the councils, so they deep down KNOW their PLACE! Nor does Naruto hurt anyone really of any importance, besides what's a beating? They ALL do that to each other and worse in spars EVERYDAY! Naruto even left the elders alive AFTER seeing them try to enslave and RAPE his supposed "beloved", so if they can get away with their lives even after that? It is safe to assume Naruto is sufficiently "TAMED"! Heck kiba FURTHER proved it, by only getting ONE kick, and A LOT OF BLUSTER from Naruto.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
You know, there IS such a thing as TOO many enemies, I don't understand why he doesn't just go around KILLING those that are against him, so what if it's illegal? What can they DO about it? All their political power and what is it good for? ABSOLUTELY NOTHING if someone like Naruto comes along. So Naruto is just going to sit around FOR YEARS and allow people to abuse him and ANYONE ELSE that he cares for? Just keep fighting them and HURTING them, until they recover and TRY AGAIN, until SOMEONE gets LUCKY and kills one of his loved ones? THAT'S JUST DUMB! It sounds repetitive and BORING!

Also where is these idiots' "SURVIVAL INSTINCT"? If the ENTIRE village PUT TOGETHER can't take down the kyuubi (and it's all ready been PROVEN that they can't) and kyuubi can't beat Naruto, then WHAT IS THE POINT of angering him? They could throw their ENTIRE village at him and it wouldn't hurt him! SURVIVAL ALONE dictates TO KEEP HIM HAPPY! (and if there is ONE thing the village knows how to do, it's survive, afterall ALL cowards know how to do that, better then anything).
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