|Reviews for Belated|
| Tai'shar Westernesse chapter 1 . 2/16
Aw. That last line just sort of punched me in the gut. The whole thing is well made; you've got the precision of a short story down, every phrase in its place, every word necessary.
| Professor J. L. Nemo chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
| AZ-woodbomb chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Tragic stuff, in a sort of sweet way. But mostly tragic.
But now I’m trying to imagine how Harley would feel about Jonathan dying. Her unobtainable bag of straw, hollow secret keeper.
Anyway, all nonsense aside, this is good. As it always is, I suppose.
| deleted9 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Well, this was rather depressing...in a great way, though hah! Just had to get the depressing comment out. Great job!
| Bovineorbitor1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I think this is maybe my favourite of all your pieces. It's certainly up there. Your ability to make Harley come alive and feel like a real, vivid person is amazing (and ironic in this context) especially since you give her so much metaphorical significance too. Just the right side of tragic. And Jon's tone is fantastic as always.