Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heartlands of Time
HarryPfanfic chapter 27 . 1/13
This was one of the best time-travelling-older-harry fic I've ever read! I loved the writing, I loved the way you portrayed Harry, and I loved how actions had consequences in the fic.

In particular, I think Tessa and/or Saturnia has the best side character story I have ever read.

However, there are somethings that just didn't make sense. The ending was very abrupt considering how long you had built it up. I didn't get how voldemort's last horcrux died... He didn't really reformed the world like he said he would, did he? I would've loved more post war details.

Voldemort had one heck of a plot armor. Also, why did Harry, who could've just waited until he got his memories back, then attack voldemort in atlantis, and then get to the infernal clock alone or something, went with that weird twisted plan? I know it would've been a boring read, but I want to point out how little sense some of Harry's decisions were making. It was like he was always following the same old script of his past lives. In the end of wastelands of time, you said that harry was trying to "change things this time" and it was great until you said that he had done that before too and he knew everything that was about to happen... I guess it wasn't new then? idk.

Also, while I LOVED Saturnia... Chronos made little sense to me. Harry should've gotten a good ending.. not the weird painful psycho type ending he got... Maybe he could've died sooner because he really did go mad or something? That would make more sense, but no, he lived a very long life; longer than fleur. Maybe you could've made his son something special and have him invent the necklace thing...

Anyways, this fic was great. These are just my gripes with the fic, it's not me criticizing you in any way.
K chapter 27 . 11/21/2023
Joe…this has been a great story. I truly enjoyed every chapter of both wastelands and heartlands of time. You’ve taken fanfiction as a medium to a place I didn’t know it could go. This has been one of the best stories I’ve read here, up there with HPMOR. Thank you for the incredible journey you’ve taken us on!
Dr. Snakes MD chapter 27 . 6/9/2023
Wastelands remains my favorite HP fic of all time. Flawless storytelling. Heartlands is a shadow of it, but the ending is earned. That means something.

Not the Harry/Fleur I wanted, but I suppose I'll just have to write that myself.

As always, thank you for writing.
Dr. Snakes MD chapter 17 . 6/9/2023
Go charge Chistopher Nolan royalties on Tenet, you wrote it first lmao.
CloakSparks25485 chapter 17 . 4/12/2023
Ah, I stand corrected. Good to see that!
CloakSparks25485 chapter 16 . 4/12/2023
Shadow reader here! I don't normally post on some stories (trying to get better), but one thing stuck out to me as odd in this chapter. Didn't Voldemort Vow not to create or use Inferi? The moment that charm is used, he's in violation of his Vow and should exact a heavy penalty, right? Other than that, very interesting story to read!
Talonwalker chapter 27 . 7/21/2022
Great story!
Thanks!
I will be checking out your regular stories as well
Now Account chapter 27 . 7/11/2022
Whew. What a ride. What a RIDE.

I don't mind that I didn't always understand everything, it makes it all the sweeter when you figure things out before the characters do.

I loved it. But I can't put it into words. Wastelands of Time was so strange at first that I didn't even really want to like it but suddenly I was five chapters in and thoroughly hooked.
knle chapter 27 . 6/12/2022
The end of an era; now I am terribly old. Thank you for finishing writing what I started reading so many years ago. It is a strange feeling to find this saga completed.
Jeremy chapter 27 . 4/27/2022
Honestly the best fanfiction story i have read in a long time, if not ever. Bravo!
erenaslan237 chapter 26 . 2/20/2022
harry potterwolwerinedoctor who it was a breathtaking journey ı feel happy...this feels not the end but a good way to end nonetheless after all there is no true beginnings or end can happen but this an end.
Simeon Smythe chapter 27 . 2/20/2022
According to canon, Harry and Hermione always hold hands when they're walking places together, but I see it nowhere in this story. Why aren't Harry and Hermione ever holding hands? And why is Harry with Filthy Flem Fatale and not with The Brightest Witch Of Her Age, or at least Ginny or something or even Saturnia who is pretty awesome? Filthy Flem Fatale is just a prop in this story and has no character other than looking pretty and being an object for the audience to cream over. Saturnia has a great character, and Hermione has one in canon, though not here obviously since you bash her constantly. If not Hermione, then at least let Saturnia hold hands with Harry for a bit, and take away Filthy Flem Fatale. Even the muggle from Australia was more worthy than this eye candy no count fool Filthy Flem Fatale. Moving on to the plot: It's pretty good, but would do with inclusion of more characters. How about having Cordelia from Buffy making an entrance? Just a suggestion. Bye bye for now. I'll be back when you are, Joey Boy!
Smartyul chapter 27 . 1/19/2022
Epic ending
Smartyul chapter 17 . 1/19/2022
I KNEW IT
Smartyul chapter 9 . 1/18/2022
Woah. Would have never expected that with Tessa.
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