Reviews for Caught
Jackie K Paper chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Please continue!
prettychocolate chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Yumm-eee! I would love to see this story continue! Sounds like a great plot waiting to happen. And you are oh so good at the lemons!
Le Crepuscule chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I absolutely loved your entry. Thanks so much for entering the contest. The only thing is that it doesn't entirely fit the contest description. Perhaps if you made a mention at one point of a lot of deaths in the nearby area? Something to hint at the Vampire Wars of the South?

Send me a PM once the changes are made, and I can add you in as our very first story :)

I'm excited.

Good luck and thank you again.

Hungry Pie chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This was so amazing!

I hope you can continue it, but if you can't, it's okay. :-)
xoAzraelxo chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
ahh! i loved it. haha naughty bella is awesome. and sleeping edward is so adorkable. loved it! you got my vote. :D

i really hope you maybe continue this after the compitition? ;D
bluntlyhonest chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
omg you HAVE to make another chapter! just one more then that's it!

that was really hot!

asleep sex...who woulda thunk it?
velvetheels chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
You aren't really going to stop there, are you?

Just when a good story was turning great!
Dazzlingbrowneyes chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Love it! IT's great reallyy!
magnessina chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Awesome idea is awesome. I can't find words to tell you how much I loved you. You've created an amazing Bella, who was totally hilarious. And sleeping Edward was too adorable for his own good. I *adored* this os (not just because I'm BJs addict). You've my vote.

Greetings from Poland,

WutheringHeights1975 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Hahahaha...abi nako dili ni nako mahuman ug basa; Ako ang gikulbaan ni Bella. My hands on my face, reading through my fingers.


Puede sad ka ug comedy mahal na reyna.

And the idea of food humping each other is so hilarious.

swell1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
MORE MORE MORE! It was just getting good!
berdb chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Is he 11 years older than her?
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