|Reviews for Caught|
| Jackie K Paper chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
| prettychocolate chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Yumm-eee! I would love to see this story continue! Sounds like a great plot waiting to happen. And you are oh so good at the lemons!
| Le Crepuscule chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I absolutely loved your entry. Thanks so much for entering the contest. The only thing is that it doesn't entirely fit the contest description. Perhaps if you made a mention at one point of a lot of deaths in the nearby area? Something to hint at the Vampire Wars of the South?
Send me a PM once the changes are made, and I can add you in as our very first story :)
Good luck and thank you again.
| Hungry Pie chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This was so amazing!
I hope you can continue it, but if you can't, it's okay. :-)
| xoAzraelxo chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
ahh! i loved it. haha naughty bella is awesome. and sleeping edward is so adorkable. loved it! you got my vote. :D
i really hope you maybe continue this after the compitition? ;D
| bluntlyhonest chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
omg you HAVE to make another chapter! just one more then that's it!
that was really hot!
asleep sex...who woulda thunk it?
| velvetheels chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
You aren't really going to stop there, are you?
Just when a good story was turning great!
| Dazzlingbrowneyes chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Love it! IT's great reallyy!
| magnessina chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Awesome idea is awesome. I can't find words to tell you how much I loved you. You've created an amazing Bella, who was totally hilarious. And sleeping Edward was too adorable for his own good. I *adored* this os (not just because I'm BJs addict). You've my vote.
Greetings from Poland,
| WutheringHeights1975 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Hahahaha...abi nako dili ni nako mahuman ug basa; Ako ang gikulbaan ni Bella. My hands on my face, reading through my fingers.
I WAS SCARED eDWARD WOULD SCREAMED RAPE!
Puede sad ka ug comedy mahal na reyna.
And the idea of food humping each other is so hilarious.
I LOVE THIS.
| swell1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
MORE MORE MORE! It was just getting good!
| berdb chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Is he 11 years older than her?