|Reviews for Keep My Casket Closed|
| AshxDawnaddicted chapter 24 . 1/4
Awesome chapter! You know how much I had been waiting for this chapter, though it was updated before, I didn't really get time as I had many tests on my head, also I was in India and recently returned to Oman, finally I had the time to review this chapter!
Bact to the review,
Ashley and Ashton really likes to tease Ash, huh! Also I like the liking Gary has taken to Dawn, I really wanna see the jealous Ash!
It was funny when Gary removed his shirt, as the shirtless Ash was getting attraction than him, especially Dawn.
Seriously, Gary being Ash's mistress! I honestly thought Gary shouldn't have said that! On top of that everyone were doubting on him and the Part where Dawn sat down making circles was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing!
I do expect next chapter soon. Will be waiting for it!
| Halo Ash chapter 24 . 11/25/2015
Been a long time since you updated. I squealed like a little girl when I got a notification that tnis story had been updated. Great chapter, I still laugh at Gary and the girls' altercations. Keep up the great work.
| Lucien Naviaux chapter 24 . 11/24/2015
I hate u. I started this story reluctantly then I couldn't stop reading. I gave up 4 hours of fallout 4 to read this. so hurry up with more chapters
| AshxDawnaddicted chapter 22 . 4/16/2015
Plz update fast.
| ashxdawnlover chapter 22 . 4/10/2015
I am curious plz continue writing
| Sean Morse chapter 22 . 4/9/2015
god finally. i thought i would have to give up on this story but thank god. you have a good thing going keep it up.
| Halo Ash chapter 22 . 4/9/2015
I've been waiting for this story to be updated for so long. Hopefully there will be more consistent updates in the future. Keep up the great work.
| J. Jamie Dupane chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
You're... You're... You're back?
I really hope that you are actually back and will restart the updating part...
| XxThatonegurlxX chapter 21 . 3/26/2015
I really love this story! I love that you added some humor to this story. Anyways I hope you continue this story :)
| Halo Ash chapter 21 . 3/14/2015
This story has got me hooked. But you haven't updated in a long time as I can see. Are you dead?
| J. Jamie Dupane chapter 20 . 4/15/2014
This is an amazing story!
Can't believe I didn't stumble upon it earlier...
Damn the number of reviews can surely be deceiving...
Nice plot and English...
Proper development, not too fast... but a Tiny BIT on slow Department...
Hope to see the next update soon...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
Awesome story I hope you update soon.
| Pokegirl185 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
This is a great story! Love it! Keep up the good work!
| CuriousChesnaught chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
This is so darn amazing!
I'll write a humongous and I do mean HUGE! review telling you guys about what I like about this story till now VS what I don't like :
*LIKE: Your fan-fiction has a huge truckload of different Genre's. You try your best to capture the readers attention by mixing different emotions, I personally LOVE this aspect about your work. Your story keeps 'running' from one place to another, it just doesn't seem to stop or go flat.
For a reader the feeling of suspense, romance, tragedy, humor, Crime(in the case of the 'boat' incident), friendship(in the girls and Gary's case), Hurt and comfort in a single story is the best feeling in the world and intrigues them to keep on reading. This story fascinates me in ways I can't describe.
I would be honest with you, in the first few chapters, I thought that this story would end plainly by making Dawn the 'goody-goody' heroine and Ash the 'Bad-boy' who by Dawn's love, will be metaphorically 'resurrected'...boy was I DEAD WRONG! when I further dug in this story, I found like I was in a hole I couldn't escape...hell, I skipped lunch and dinner because I decided to read this fanfic once more.
Excellent work on the fight, you did great on capturing the whole battle in a single chapter, it is a pretty tough job and I loved it!
I'd tip my hat (If was wearing one :P) and salute you sir, for being an original inspiration for younger writer's like me, though like any other fanfic, this one has a few faults in it as well...
*DISLIKES: First, I'll tell you that chapter 21 was a little short in my opinion, I don't mean to rush you in any way but still, I was expecting a somewhat longer chapter by you :( I'm not even sure that the long wait was exactly 'worth' it, even though you added a very tense cliffhanger in the end and introduced Ash's Lucario, this chapter was not as great as compared to the previous chapters. Fret not, being a close follower of this Fanfic I won't judge it by one single chapter. Second, I'm getting this awkward feeling that you are slowly God-modding Ash, As a reader I need to tell you this. If you could just compare the strengths of the others and Ash, they seem like mere beginners. Could you just promote the strength of the others as trainer's? If you watch the Black and White-episode in which Dawn and Ash from the anime battle at Cynthia's place, you will see that Dawn's quilava and Ash's Pikachu are par in the case of strength.
The grammar mistakes, I'll be honest with you...I don't pay attention to them in any story, I just emphasize on how well the author tried to write the story or was the story worth the readers time. I can't properly criticize you on something that I am not good at myself, Sorry XD
This is all my thought's and opinions on how the story is...YET!.
You probably don't wanna hear about how well you characterized the people in this story because even you must be extremely proud on how well you did that. It even sounds realistic from time to time.
I'll be going now! Best of luck continuing this Fanfic and happy holidays!
| W. R. Winters chapter 21 . 12/7/2013
Dun dun DUN!
If that won't wake you up I don't know what will, amazing story. In my opinion it could use more pearlshipping, but this is your story do what you want with it