|Reviews for Keep My Casket Closed|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6
Awesome story I hope you update soon.
| Pokegirl185 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
This is a great story! Love it! Keep up the good work!
| Blackscorpion2 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
This is so darn amazing!
I'll write a humongous and I do mean HUGE! review telling you guys about what I like about this story till now VS what I don't like :
*LIKE: Your fan-fiction has a huge truckload of different Genre's. You try your best to capture the readers attention by mixing different emotions, I personally LOVE this aspect about your work. Your story keeps 'running' from one place to another, it just doesn't seem to stop or go flat.
For a reader the feeling of suspense, romance, tragedy, humor, Crime(in the case of the 'boat' incident), friendship(in the girls and Gary's case), Hurt and comfort in a single story is the best feeling in the world and intrigues them to keep on reading. This story fascinates me in ways I can't describe.
I would be honest with you, in the first few chapters, I thought that this story would end plainly by making Dawn the 'goody-goody' heroine and Ash the 'Bad-boy' who by Dawn's love, will be metaphorically 'resurrected'...boy was I DEAD WRONG! when I further dug in this story, I found like I was in a hole I couldn't escape...hell, I skipped lunch and dinner because I decided to read this fanfic once more.
Excellent work on the fight, you did great on capturing the whole battle in a single chapter, it is a pretty tough job and I loved it!
I'd tip my hat (If was wearing one :P) and salute you sir, for being an original inspiration for younger writer's like me, though like any other fanfic, this one has a few faults in it as well...
*DISLIKES: First, I'll tell you that chapter 21 was a little short in my opinion, I don't mean to rush you in any way but still, I was expecting a somewhat longer chapter by you :( I'm not even sure that the long wait was exactly 'worth' it, even though you added a very tense cliffhanger in the end and introduced Ash's Lucario, this chapter was not as great as compared to the previous chapters. Fret not, being a close follower of this Fanfic I won't judge it by one single chapter. Second, I'm getting this awkward feeling that you are slowly God-modding Ash, As a reader I need to tell you this. If you could just compare the strengths of the others and Ash, they seem like mere beginners. Could you just promote the strength of the others as trainer's? If you watch the Black and White-episode in which Dawn and Ash from the anime battle at Cynthia's place, you will see that Dawn's quilava and Ash's Pikachu are par in the case of strength.
The grammar mistakes, I'll be honest with you...I don't pay attention to them in any story, I just emphasize on how well the author tried to write the story or was the story worth the readers time. I can't properly criticize you on something that I am not good at myself, Sorry XD
This is all my thought's and opinions on how the story is...YET!.
You probably don't wanna hear about how well you characterized the people in this story because even you must be extremely proud on how well you did that. It even sounds realistic from time to time.
I'll be going now! Best of luck continuing this Fanfic and happy holidays!
| W. R. Winters chapter 21 . 12/7/2013
Dun dun DUN!
If that won't wake you up I don't know what will, amazing story. In my opinion it could use more pearlshipping, but this is your story do what you want with it
| Blackscorpion2 chapter 20 . 11/30/2013
I have three words for this story, Original, Dramatic, and AWESOME! seriously, why the heck is this story deep in the shadows?!
update it please, I'd love to know what happens next.
The girls i.e May, Zoey,Misty and Dawn are hilarious! I almost rolled out of my seat when I read May's line about the magic forces thingy.
Gary's back! Yes my favorite egotistical pervert has appeared!
Best of luck with future chapters and yes I would like to make a request, could you add something that relates to Professor Oak's theory on how the feelings of Pokemon reflect the feelings of trainer's? :) and then the girls find out about this and try to seduce Ash's Pikachu with their own newly caught female Pikachu. It can have a sassy attitude and a hatred for her love rival, buneary XD.
The PikachuXBunearyXPikachu shipping could be hilarious! XP
| Sean Morse chapter 20 . 10/19/2013
finish it please
| Sean Morse chapter 19 . 10/19/2013
this is getting exciting
| ben chapter 20 . 10/9/2013
Why is this not more popular? Seriously, this is genius! The plot is original and compelling, the chapters are a good length, and the characters are portrayed excelently. It probably doesn't mean much from some no name who can't spell, but don't stop!
| Pokegirl185 chapter 18 . 9/6/2013
I love the story i especially like the star wars, and karate kid puns their hilarious pikachu is awesome :-)
| Pokegirl185 chapter 19 . 9/6/2013
Plz update this story rocks :-)
| Infernape7 chapter 19 . 9/1/2013
Finally an update, honestly i thought u had abandoned this story, but i guess i was wrong. You did a great job with this chapter, every little thing was perfect. Looking forward for ur next update i hope it doesnt take as long as this one :P and all the best, keep up the good work :D
| FloraFaveXNara-Wire chapter 19 . 9/1/2013
Dawn's story made me get emotional. and i am so happy that you updated. I'm in love with this story and i want to know who that man is.
| Crazy girl chapter 17 . 12/9/2012
OMG THIS IS AMAZING!
| biginferno chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
| bre chapter 17 . 7/14/2012