|Reviews for Bella Ciao|
| mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
This just killed me, it was so good though, very well written, yes I was crying, but they will be reunited soon and they will be happy and in no pain with no worries
| mostly a lurker chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Wow. Just wow. What a powerful story. I loved it! I loved how you started and ended with remembrance, as if he were speaking to me. I'm not a crier, yet I was teary at the end. So beautiful, so painful, so gritty and real. Beautiful, beautiful job.
Good luck in the contest!
p.s. small point: it's 'okay' not 'o.k.'
| asiula chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
That was such a good story!
Tho I cried that she didn't make it :(
| dellaterra chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I look up from my computer screen, surprised to discover that I am still in a warm, cozy bedroom and not a cold mountain village caught in the crossfire of war, or at the bedside of an aged soldier and master storyteller.
I sigh and brush away the tears that have fallen as I emerge from this vivid world you have so skillfully created. The authentic voice of your narrator, the canon details written in with the lightest of touches, the historical realism have all captivated me.
Thank you so much for taking the time and care to create this wonderful, sad story. Good luck in the contest!
| The Cullen's Secret chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I am sobbing as I write this but I have no other words than it was beautiful ... just beautiful :')
| PrincessKris chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Didn't really expect the end. That was sad and it made me cry. It was a great one-shot and it really felt complete at the end. Thank you for writing and good luck.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
This was riveting!
While reading it was as if I was transcended through your words.
Such beautiful story with a sad yet hopeful ending.
I loved how you brought it across through Edward's eyes..
Thank for sharing this and good luck...
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
wow, moving and powerful and love. wonderful story, heartbreaking, but truely wonderful. great writing!
| se314 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I loved this :)
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Best war love story EVER.
I love the way you told the story. :)
Sad that Bella died and heartbroken for Edward but I see that if Bella had lived it would not have been realistic at all. :(
Thank you for writing this.
| tilly77 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Wow! That was so moving, so beautifully written. You've really captured the time and given us a taste of what it must've been like. Just amazing.
| HoochieMomma chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Beautiful, beautiful poignant story. You really capture the quiet desparation he felt, and perfectly nailed the mood of the time!
| tanglingshadows chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Good Lord, I'm crying. That was really beautiful! Great, great story! I'm really impressed by your writing. Good luck with the contest! :)
| MissRebecca912 chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
That was absolutely beautiful!
| my2galspal chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Best one I've read yet. I love the historical setting even in sadness, your story is beautiful. I especially love the way you worked the poem in at the end. It, more than anything else, lent such an air of canonicity.
Excellent job. Thank you so much for sharing your story with the rest of us. I hope to read more from you in the future and wish you the best of luck in the contest.