|Reviews for The Affair|
| sweetpumpkin chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
*nosebleed . that was hot
| spiel chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Aside from some small mistakes here and there this is a rather enjoyable read. I like Zack constantly teasing Cloud :)
| Mirokou chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
i say continue the storyline
| ShadeGate chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Tipsy, huh? I'd love to read what happens when you're down-right drunk! Great work. And now, to die of the nosebleed that I've been holding back.
| Aishiteru Sabaku no Gaara chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
O/O Wow...that was sexy~ good job!
| Chrystel Malfoy-Potter chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Office sex! Really hot and good!
Great job. v
| Lain Fyrs chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Very Good! I like the short storyline and how you left it open for the readers imagination after Cloud gets taken away by Sephiroth.
Just one thing: Needs some major editing. There are way too many grammar and spelling mistakes to be ignored. Just go ask someone to beta and you'll be fine.