Reviews for The Affair
sweetpumpkin chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
*nosebleed . that was hot
spiel chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Aside from some small mistakes here and there this is a rather enjoyable read. I like Zack constantly teasing Cloud :)
Mirokou chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
i say continue the storyline
ShadeGate chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Tipsy, huh? I'd love to read what happens when you're down-right drunk! Great work. And now, to die of the nosebleed that I've been holding back.
Aishiteru Sabaku no Gaara chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
O/O Wow...that was sexy good job!
Chrystel Malfoy-Potter chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Office sex! Really hot and good!

Great job. v
Lain Fyrs chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Very Good! I like the short storyline and how you left it open for the readers imagination after Cloud gets taken away by Sephiroth.

Just one thing: Needs some major editing. There are way too many grammar and spelling mistakes to be ignored. Just go ask someone to beta and you'll be fine.