|Reviews for Naruto: 893|
| The Forgettable One chapter 12 . 7/4
I didn't want to review until I finished but I can safely say this is a good fanfiction. The story is a slow pace which is a nice change of pace with fics that usually take four chapters to cover the chunin exams. My only problem with the story is in some cases you end a sentence with a comma with a period and a few times where it look like auto-correct changed a word.
Still, this is a nice fic that focuses on the smart side of Naruto instead of the strong but idoitic Naruto. He might be a bit of a "Gary Sue" since none of his flaws came into play but nonetheless this is a unquie take on Naruto.
| GrimmReaperII chapter 12 . 10/19/2015
A great spin on the rarely seen Yakuza Naruto fanfics. I look forward to reading more of this fanfic
| chris kidder chapter 12 . 5/16/2015
keep on writing
| SaucyHandles chapter 12 . 7/9/2014
:D such an amazing story.
| SaucyHandles chapter 9 . 7/8/2014
This is so epic.
| Nirvana48 chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
Awesome I really like this story. :)
| Nanashi113 chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
| Igor De Souza Santos chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
| Knight Guard chapter 12 . 4/5/2013
this was a great story
| erching chapter 12 . 12/26/2012
hope you continue someday this is not bad at all
| alec-potter chapter 12 . 11/21/2012
Nice story so far...sad that lack of reviews has put this on hold...
Hope you pick this up again.
| alec-potter chapter 10 . 11/21/2012
Nice part with Yayoi...things will def. get interesting with Anko around..
| alec-potter chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
It's an interesting story..won't mind seeing a repeat of Yayoi.
Naruto's plans are still not clear...hope that changes soon..
| Sai the Ink Master chapter 12 . 11/8/2012
Man this is just getting better and better. Please continue this or at least one moer chapter for Naruto to **** up the civilian council and stuff.
| Silvermane1 chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
fantastic story please update