Reviews for Sin
Neon la'Shadow chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
this is good. i don't usually read poems. and if i do i usually forget about them. i liked this.

good work

3333/ X 4-1/2 3's
AnimeKeepsMeSane chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
*jaw drop* WOW! That is absolutely perfect!
Chocolate.Covered.Taylor chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Well I felt like reading some more of your masterpieces today and this one stuck out to me. This is SO beautiful, I cant even explain it. The wording, the rhythm, everything was so beautiful. How you describe something is the best, you may not always say what something is, but we can use our imagination for that, and we can take the poem and apply it to our own life! Awesome job _
scrambled-eggs-at-midnight chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I love how fast you're able to pump these out. XD

Ah, Ryou. There are so many ways to portray him. You're very good at entering his strange little mind. I liked the dissanance in this one. Delicious.

I'd write an epic-er review, but I'm kind of sick and can't type very well. XD But, as always, this was a lovely form of love. And if you ever stop writing these, I'll kill you. (But in a totally non-creepy way!)

That... made no sense. Ah... yeah.

Huggles!

-Eggy