|Reviews for Mine|
| The Love Doc chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
AWWWWW! SOOOO cute! :333 My heart just melted into a little puddle when Blurr purposed to Alice! ;3
Stupid Sentinel! Trying to ruin Blurr's happiness! DX *Gives SP a good swat in the helm*
lol, I was listening to the song when I was reading it! XD
All in all, this was a great fic! :3
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
While I do admire the point you're trying to get across here in this one-shot, I am afraid to say that it is not really a story if it's mostly a song. The events are rather random, as there is no (or vague) explanation as to why Blurr and Alice are together. It's just assumed that Blurr loves her for no reason. At one point, you even call Alice "Crysalis", which no explanation.
I hate to say it, but it's kind of boring. I have no real feel for these characters, and I'd even say that Blurr is non-canon.