|Reviews for Have Mercy|
| Carovinee chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
Awesome story! Keep it going!
| ecto1B chapter 4 . 9/26/2010
I'm still cracking up over "Shepherd I'm gonna kick you!"
I'm seriously liking this story. I also love your writing style. Very fluid, very unique... :D All in all, a really good job.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
Ace chap please include Archer in Chap 5
| Dunedain789 chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
WOOOOOO FOR GHOST! Loved it how he kicked in the door instead of just opening it like a normal person. And you're starting to build a real character for Ghost MacTavish and Blade. Next chapter ASAPPPP!
| Dunedain789 chapter 3 . 9/17/2010
Awwwww yay! SOAP! *hugs MacTavish*
I love this story! Keep writing! I ORDER YOU! D
| The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
I admire what you have done here, but I can give some tips.
Maybe go more into Blade's past life, and her skirmishes before she joined the military. It will give more substance for her.
Other than that, I do like the idea.
| mw2lvr chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
Great so far! Maybe next chapter could be from Capitan Soap's point of view, and the call he gets about blade, and her arrival? Just a thought. KUTGW!
| Dunedain789 chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
Lol. Shepherd is such a git *proceeds to strangle him*
Wonderful second chapter! Can't wait to see Ghost's reaction to a girl joining the 141.
Ghost: O.o *twitch*
| CrazedTB chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
This seems really interesting so far! Please continue! C:
| Dunedain789 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Wow. Sounds like a good start! Ummm. Well, if you wanted to (and I'm guessing he's joining the 141 at some stage) then he could aid in getting Roach and Ghost out of Loose Ends alive? Just a thought...
Can't wait to read more! )