Reviews for the universals secret
Yeah Her chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is really good! Please update soon!
DusksDarkness chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
Cute story. Your chapters are a bit short and could use a bit more detail, but the idea is good and clear. I'm interested in seeing how something like this might turn out. I hope you continue.
Fennendra chapter 5 . 10/29/2012
i just started 2 read this and i hope that u will update soon.
DeadPiccolo chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Hurry up! Plz!
DiamondDragonFrost chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
It's a bit rushed. Try to add more detail and make it longer. I think your title should be 'The Universal's Secret'.

It's a cool idea.

Dia
Loony-1995 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Good story so far :) Just wish there was more in each chapter.
Auburn Waves chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
You need to make the chapters longer, but this is good.
k8yxx chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
I wonder wat happens next...?I hope u update soon. Wat will the trustees ask Connie? Cn u plz make the chapters a bit longer.

Tx
k8yxx chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
What happens next? I like this so far but u cud make the chapters a bit longer.

Hp u update soon
itsangee chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
nice :D still liking it, but your chapters are a little short, you could make them a bit longer :)

Angelmail x
itsangee chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
like it so far, hoep you update soon :)

Angelmail x
k8yxx chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Nic3 idea.

I wonder where ur taking this story.

Hp u update soon

T