|Reviews for the universals secret|
| Tom Cat Hengrave chapter 3 . 4/3
:O Hmm, I almost doubt that Col would go to the Trustee's without talking to Connie first. But it's your story. :)
I know a lot of people have mentioned this already, but if you could, making the chapters longer would be good. :)
Good job! :)
| Tom Cat Hengrave chapter 2 . 4/3
:O Secrets secrets secrets.
Whatever happened to Col on the moor?
| lizthepau chapter 1 . 4/3
Hey there! I just finished skimming through your profile, and I love the Avengers to. :) (Gotta love Loki and Bucky. I love Bucky...) Yeah, you could say I have an obsession with him.
ANYWAY, I think that it might be a bit too sudden for Col to realize that she kind of has Kullervo and stuff, but other than that, good job! :)
| Yeah Her chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is really good! Please update soon!
| DusksDarkness chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
Cute story. Your chapters are a bit short and could use a bit more detail, but the idea is good and clear. I'm interested in seeing how something like this might turn out. I hope you continue.
| Fennendra chapter 5 . 10/29/2012
i just started 2 read this and i hope that u will update soon.
| DeadPiccolo chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
Hurry up! Plz!
| DiamondDragonFrost chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
It's a bit rushed. Try to add more detail and make it longer. I think your title should be 'The Universal's Secret'.
It's a cool idea.
| Loony-1995 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Good story so far :) Just wish there was more in each chapter.
| Auburn Waves chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
You need to make the chapters longer, but this is good.
| k8yxx chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
I wonder wat happens next...?I hope u update soon. Wat will the trustees ask Connie? Cn u plz make the chapters a bit longer.
| k8yxx chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
What happens next? I like this so far but u cud make the chapters a bit longer.
Hp u update soon
| itsangee chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
nice :D still liking it, but your chapters are a little short, you could make them a bit longer :)
| itsangee chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
like it so far, hoep you update soon :)
| k8yxx chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I wonder where ur taking this story.
Hp u update soon