Reviews for Mistakes
EmmaRandomAs chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
intreging story... i like it!
TheLyraAnn chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
awwwww such a good story and i really liked the little Ron Krum bits there are not enough stories out there with those to or Krum in general *hands you more cookies and mountain dew*
kathyjo chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Very slytherin of Harry..
kathyjo chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Well BAM thats one way to get attention! life is about to get interesting!
kathyjo chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Story has potential..tho arthur taking harry like that seems strange (no back story etc) but i think I will enjoy this story
Ryuujin Shinkami Ashura chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
It so sad

but i like it what will happen in the baby future?

Will Harry will gave Lucius and Severus more baby of their own?

Or there will be more chapter?

Are there will more chapter in Logan/Harry in animalistic?
Mika the Dark princess chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
Lov it
Jambled Distress chapter 4 . 10/15/2010
It was a good story, a little too fast-paced and it was a little weird how Arthur just attacked him. But It all fit together well, and overall, I enjoyed the hell out of it. Especially when Harry would be all slytherin and get his way. It was so cute! :D
GeorgieGirl999 chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
this is really good, but really sad! good job!
cupcakesareyummy chapter 4 . 10/11/2010
aww its so sad that ron died alone, but i love how krum still loved him in the end
Madame de Coeur chapter 4 . 10/6/2010
DUDE!

I was crying at the end! I freaken loved this story!

Thank you!
SamHAS chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
I liked it. Felt a bit rushed, but that just might be me.

A lovely, family story. Love the heaven part!

Bravo!
hitorisuko chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
Aww, that was a sweet story, a bit awkward in a funny way, but sweet /grins/. What I'm really impressed by is the fact that you managed to have such well written work in only four chapters /shakes head/ I wish I could do that. I can't make anything only four chapters long to save my life. But that's beside the point, you have alovely story here!

hitori-
Dracolovesmebest chapter 4 . 10/3/2010
I dont even know what to say...good job?
xXBloodyxXxBlossomXx chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
aww that was adorable! and poor Ron! i really liked it (:
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