Reviews for Mistakes
Jessarie chapter 4 . 5/9/2011
You had quite a few grammatical errors within the story, but given that the story was rather good I am overlooking those minor mistakes. It was a little rushed and I understand that as well as I have been known for rushing my own stories in my excitement. Severus and Lucius were OOC, but I believe your explanation using their Veela nature handles that very well. Overall good work, you should continue writing. Only with practice can one improve. Many :), Jess
AkiraNatsume chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Awe, poor Ron. But he looks happy. Anymore chapters?
thedragonninjamurcury chapter 4 . 12/28/2010
i loved this soo much! this is truly one of the best i have ever read!
SilkenRoseDreams chapter 4 . 12/19/2010
awww... I liked it, but its so sad!
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 4 . 12/13/2010
Good work.

It was a bitersweet ending but a great story.

I really enjoyed it

I'm glad Lucius and Severus accepted Harry's baby and that Lily will be loved as well

Kudos

Blade
choccream24 chapter 4 . 11/26/2010
T_T You made me cry! I hate you!

That being said, I'd like to say you have wrote another interesting story. Keep up the good work!
BlazedObsidian chapter 4 . 11/21/2010
WOW! I stopped reading fanfic a while ago because I had started getting bored with the storylines people came up with. I tried picking it up again today and I am soooooo glad I did. This story was fantastic! I loved the plot twists you made as well as the characters. I am still so giddy from reading the story right now that I am having a hard time writing a meaningful review, so I will leave it at: Thank you and please keep writing!
EmmaRandomAs chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
intreging story... i like it!
TheLyraAnn chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
awwwww such a good story and i really liked the little Ron Krum bits there are not enough stories out there with those to or Krum in general *hands you more cookies and mountain dew*
kathyjo chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Very slytherin of Harry..
kathyjo chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Well BAM thats one way to get attention! life is about to get interesting!
kathyjo chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Story has potential..tho arthur taking harry like that seems strange (no back story etc) but i think I will enjoy this story
Ryuujin Shinkami Ashura chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
It so sad

but i like it what will happen in the baby future?

Will Harry will gave Lucius and Severus more baby of their own?

Or there will be more chapter?

Are there will more chapter in Logan/Harry in animalistic?
Mika the Dark princess chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
Lov it
Jambled Distress chapter 4 . 10/15/2010
It was a good story, a little too fast-paced and it was a little weird how Arthur just attacked him. But It all fit together well, and overall, I enjoyed the hell out of it. Especially when Harry would be all slytherin and get his way. It was so cute! :D
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