|Reviews for Marie D Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age!
| Swarma chapter 18 . 10/23/2023
doesn't that commodore being able to swim with her fish zoan contradict what you said earlier about the water user? water first and fruit second?
| kaleidoscopeMediator chapter 34 . 10/16/2023
I don't know if it's either because I just finished reading this in the early hours or if I've drunk enough coffee that my brain is fried but what I came away from reading this story is that I love it, and I now ship Law and Garreth :D
Thank you so much for writing this story :)
| DBoblivion chapter 2 . 2/17/2023
not that I feel like particularly arguing against any of your opinions or whatever, but it feels like narrator commentary on outside tropes and concepts are taking precedent over letting the story play out.
I'm all for deconstructing deconstruction but I prefer it to be a bit more subtle
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 34 . 1/11/2023
Thank you. I have a hopeful ending for Mar that she existed somehow with memories intact. But correcting the world/s with a simple wish just makes sense and right. I... I have a hard time parting this wonderful story. Silly old me wishing that Strawhats are still alive and the "Finding Strawhats" quest is set but plot twist slaps me.
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 23 . 1/11/2023
Chopper has so much faith to Law
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 21 . 1/11/2023
Trafalgar Law is the first person that comes to my mind. Next is Sanji because he's familiar with different knives and scalpel is not different. I consider Chopper but Mar would notice the obvious so I canceled Chopper. Even if that happens, my logic sense doesn't explain how he got human like hands until Oda said otherwise. Also, I don't know why I include Sanji, except for knives, he doesn't have much knowledge of medicine. I would notice he goes to the kitchen. All that's left is Law, including his background and medical knowledge plus familiarity with Sunny? Don't forget the murder vibe fits him. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA LAW NEVER LEFT MY MIND
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 20 . 1/11/2023
Her father is so AWESOME!
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 19 . 1/11/2023
YAHHHHHH NOOOOO JDHXJEJDN NO WAY
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 18 . 1/11/2023
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 15 . 1/11/2023
Her devil fruit is a horror material!
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 13 . 1/11/2023
I have a fucking suspicious!
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 12 . 1/11/2023
I hope it's not connected to multiverse.
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 11 . 1/11/2023
Shit, greetings from the enemy first, aye?
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 10 . 1/11/2023
The hell she look a like the imposter?!
| Xiyou-Chan chapter 8 . 1/11/2023
I LITERALLY CRIED